The TRshady Forum became read-only in December 2014. The 10 year history will live on, in this archive.
Continue the discussion with the new home for the Eminem and Hip Hop discussion: HipHopShelter.com.

I Took The Red And The Blue Pill

All locked or closed battles.

I Took The Red And The Blue Pill

Postby Rain Matrix » Nov 2nd, '06, 19:27

Call It a Wall I'm Solid I won't Fall I don't rap from my Wallet not Mine/
I only Pay Notice to Slay the Motive of the man who Wrote This Line//

so Conduct an Investigation Stuck In This Placement it's time to Move/
were Fucked a Guessing Nation Erupts a Protesting Obligation to Lose//

I Reveal What's Known I didn't have to Steal The Throne I like it Here/
I Play Tricks like I Slay Kids trying to Say This so I Made It Clear//

Fold Quick a Old Tip do you want punches or a Bold Kick Tell It Straight/
Hold On your So Wrong your Flows Gone like a Slow Song so Elevate//

you shine like Dirt thats about what your Worth your already Hurt /
try again that won't Work I'm Beserk I'll send you back to the Earth//

your so Plain it's hard to Explain the Same Thing it's like your in Training/
Gaining on the picture your Painting keep Complaining I'm not Straining//

am I an Alcoholic one Bar At A Stand listen to the Lesson Friend/
I Shall Flow Demolish till you Start to Splatter Man the Refs On Ten//
User avatar
Rain Matrix
Soldier
Soldier
 
Posts: 1967
Joined: Oct 6th, '06, 21:25
Location: In that mirage you saw.
Gender: Male

Re: I Took The Red And The Blue Pill

Postby Marth » Nov 2nd, '06, 19:43

Rain Matrix wrote:Call It a Wall I'm Solid I won't Fall I don't rap from my Wallet not Mine/
I only Pay Notice to Slay the Motive of the man who Wrote This Line//

so Conduct an Investigation Stuck In This Placement it's time to Move/
were Fucked a Guessing Nation Erupts a Protesting Obligation to Lose//

I Reveal What's Known I didn't have to Steal The Throne I like it Here/
I Play Tricks like I Slay Kids trying to Say This so I Made It Clear//

Fold Quick a Old Tip do you want punches or a Bold Kick Tell It Straight/
Hold On your So Wrong your Flows Gone like a Slow Song so Elevate//

you shine like Dirt thats about what your Worth your already Hurt /
try again that won't Work I'm Beserk I'll send you back to the Earth//

your so Plain it's hard to Explain the Same Thing it's like your in Training/
Gaining on the picture your Painting keep Complaining I'm not Straining//

am I an Alcoholic one Bar At A Stand listen to the Lesson Friend/
I Shall Flow Demolish till you Start to Splatter Man the Refs On Ten//


some good rhymes, some rhymes forced, without flow
just the shit you always write, it's good men
I think you want to rhyme to much, so a few points don't got flow
but in the most places the rhymes just give more flow
User avatar
Marth
Soldier
Soldier
 
Posts: 595
Joined: Sep 26th, '06, 18:38
Location: Solar system milkyway
Gender: Male


Return to Past Battles



Who is online

Users browsing this forum: No registered users

cron