Kez v. Enimee(VOTE NOWWW!)

by **Enimee** » Nov 12th, '06, 18:06

20 lines
3-0 knock out
4-1 tko
first to 5 votes wins
ill spit first

by **Enimee** » Nov 12th, '06, 18:45

these verses i be spittin are straight influental
your flow is just a rental
my punch lines hit you so hard youll need a doctor for you dental
im bout to floor it put my pedal to the metal
so steamed gonna boil over like a kettle
ima leave you in my wake
your spirit i break
invade your brain with constant hate
your flows so terrible it makes me constipate
my flow is like diareah
its like a onomatopoeia
you hermaphoditean
you cant see me im ata sight
my punches will ruin your respatory system
i got mental complications should i list em?
im phsycotic and skitzofrantic
theres another disorder that makes me panic
i cant stand close quaters and my depression is manic
or manic depression whatever im bi polar, and i cant stand it
yo cant rap for shit and your older so just can it

sorry it took so long had to handle some home issues

by **Kez** » Nov 12th, '06, 20:21

I told ya don't lie that you're bipolar
Just cause your rap is devoid of rhymes like dry cola
It's lost it's essence, it probably originated in the dump truck
The offspring of a rotten banana and a carrot produced this dumb fuck
So sickening it makes you want to upchuck
And as for his rap, to be honest i don't think it could suck
Anymore than it does, even if it was in Korean
You're spitting so much shit that you're constipated and you're bleeding!
I'm afraid to tell you Enimee
That you should move away to somewhere like Tenna Reef
So we don't have to hear you try to earn respect
Our ears burn and get pounding when we heard the rest
Of your rap that you're putting here to try to sway the votes
I'm not the one who is in love with Goatse and likes to play with goats!
The quality of you reminds me of Eminem on Foolish Pride
You need to battle people worse than you instead of tryna fool with mine
It's such a waste of space you posting this you're like a criminal
You need to keep your battles quiet and at the minimal
My rap gives you the high but yours just blows the buzz
This guy's prolly scared to read my reply anyway, because he knows his sucked!

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Start voting
No hate Eminee just battling :flower:

Vote with:
Flow
Punches
Wordplay
Multies
Humour
Complexity
Structure
Other

by **Enimee** » Nov 12th, '06, 20:25

nice drop man...yeah no hate...but my name is spelled Enimee...

by **skitzophrenick916** » Nov 12th, '06, 23:31

yo enimee u try 2 use mi name to diss him lol but u remind me of a young me wen i started a few years ago its alright but u need more structure lyk this shuldnt be two lines

ima leave you in my wake
your spirit i break

and keep lines equal itll flow better

by **Kez** » Nov 13th, '06, 00:18

So who's your vote for?

by **,-,'-{Bar}-',-,** » Nov 13th, '06, 00:20

Flow - kez - his wasnt great but far better than enimee
Punches - both
Wordplay - both
Multies - kez
Humour -none
Complexity - kez
Structure - kez

vote: kez

by **Kez** » Nov 13th, '06, 01:00

1-0 vote people

by **Kez** » Nov 13th, '06, 18:57

Vote.

by **C-Game** » Nov 13th, '06, 19:11

skitzophrenick916 wrote:yo enimee u try 2 use mi name to diss him lol but u remind me of a young me wen i started a few years ago its alright but u need more structure lyk this shuldnt be two lines

ima leave you in my wake
your spirit i break

and keep lines equal itll flow better

totally agree

i think it was pretty even contest
but kez had multis and his structure was better than enimee
kez did had flow
both had some nice punches

The quality of you reminds me of Eminem on Foolish Pride
You need to battle people worse than you instead of tryna fool with mine

my punch lines hit you so hard youll need a doctor for you dental
im bout to floor it put my pedal to the metal

final vote kez
but enimee i hv read all ur battles and man everybattle u keep steppin up
well done bro :worship:

by **Enimee** » Nov 13th, '06, 19:13

thnx cgame much love, aight wuz that 2-0? i think i mighta lost this one too...."sigh" oh well lets get the next vote n see

by **MoBrat** » Nov 13th, '06, 19:21

enimee's first three lines were good then half way through it wasn't as good but my vote goes 2 enimee nice battle

by **Enimee** » Nov 13th, '06, 19:26

chea boi 2-1, thnx fer the vote Mo

by **MoBrat** » Nov 13th, '06, 19:27

no problem gotta show some luv u got my vote with the first 3 lines after that u had me hook, line and sinker :smoking:

by **C-Game** » Nov 13th, '06, 19:32

Enimee wrote:thnx cgame much love, aight wuz that 2-0? i think i mighta lost this one too...."sigh" oh well lets get the next vote n see

no worries :worship:

keep ur game up man and u will be ryt on the top

nice drop both of ya
:worship:

Kez v. Enimee(VOTE NOWWW!)

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