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Postby MoBrat » Nov 13th, '06, 05:21

Dont wanna spit at u anymore but ur the who stepped in the door
trying 2 pour acid on my sore so this is number 4 sotp acting hardcore
u not with the crips cut u till ur blood drips like a river
u like the way i deliver my lines just like active mines dont u see the signs
u suck when u start rapping it sounds like ur yapping ur mouth
go ahead take your med go to bed and dream of beating me instead
im like white led ur just a misled pill head ur softer then bananna bread
fresh out the oven got everyone luvin what im spitting
got u sitting thinking of quitting hitting ur self cause u cant think of anything 2 write
im ending this shit tonight go ahead bite my rhymes aren't edible
with incredible style better pick up the phone n dial
im a versatile writer ur still a biter so 4th times a charm
hope this sets of an alarm dont wanna harm u
gotta subdue my rage dont care if i write a half page or a full page
i'll get on stage and engage the opposition
my mission is 2 be a musician looked at as a magician
u gave me the ignition 2 start the demolition
u got signed on condition think u can put out a platinum edition on pure ambition

ok ppl some1's gotta respond 2 this im not that good u pll could eat me alive :whistle: i'll be wating
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Postby Rain Matrix » Nov 13th, '06, 06:11

I will Smack You like a Wack Fool send your ass Back to School
your not a Problem worth Solving I hit you once your not Responding Noob
it's Rain Time so Blame Mine when I've Slain your Rymes
I'm Fast with Mad Hits like don't Ask It and end up in a Casket in your Mind
It's Pouring I'm at your Door And while your Snoring I'll Get You
I'm Soaring in this Forum your Boring your done wanna Bet dude
I'm Too Ill for your New Skill I'll teach you How To Flow
you'll Understand the Man's Plan the "Hands" Land like Now You Know

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Postby MoBrat » Nov 13th, '06, 06:34

Gotta find a word to get me going not sure how 2 start flowing n start showing my true skills fuck ur 2 kills u'll pop 3 pills fuck up ur vision till u cant even make a decision got no percision aim quit trying to frame my name next time u try to blame me smash u 2 debris then we'll see if we can agree then it wouldn't have to be this way and u wouldn't have to be on display thats what i pray every day dont delay listen 2 what i say when u hit play dont betray with ur essay in ur book u dont even look its like ur shook dont know what u took anymore u act like ur so hardcore i liked it before when we wernt at war we were friends we went around the same bends borrowed each others pens
Ok this is just another random freestyle let me know what yall think?
and y is it always rain matrix that responds to my stuff? yall need 2 respond more often cause he tends 2 kick my @$$ :happy:
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Postby 604pn0i » Nov 26th, '06, 02:47

yur stuff is kinda forced, dont use multis until youve got a lil more expierence, b/c the sore part
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nice though :D
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Postby MoBrat » Nov 26th, '06, 02:54

i dont like the way multies make my rhymes sound so i dont try 2 use them im more of a song writer then a freestyle battler im just here 2 get more expierence and help me get more skill thanks 4 the comment tho :worship:
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Postby Enimee » Nov 26th, '06, 09:33

this is directed at all mc's willin to get disected
my structures what i erected read these two weak posts and i wrecked it

your just another enimee groupie, like an old lady with a tatto of snoopy
on her ass, and she goes by pookie, you'n'her love scat you eat dookie

haha. and after the laughter dies down, ill attack her and smack her and ask whos fly now// your talkin like william shatner except faster now look at my frown

i kill rappers cause im tired of weak ass imitations, your not crabs so be real and finish rapin// that 12 your old girl who loves double penetration, im just another wnna be eminem that the senates facin

and i dont care this shit is just for humour, cause im so high im in a drunken stupor// could prolly touch the ring of jupiter, just to show your your status is stupider



just some shit im fuckin wit
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Postby polluted » Nov 26th, '06, 10:17

MoBrat wrote:Gotta find a word to get me going not sure how 2 start flowing n start showing my true skills fuck ur 2 kills u'll pop 3 pills fuck up ur vision till u cant even make a decision got no percision aim quit trying to frame my name next time u try to blame me smash u 2 debris then we'll see if we can agree then it wouldn't have to be this way and u wouldn't have to be on display thats what i pray every day dont delay listen 2 what i say when u hit play dont betray with ur essay in ur book u dont even look its like ur shook dont know what u took anymore u act like ur so hardcore i liked it before when we wernt at war we were friends we went around the same bends borrowed each others pens
Ok this is just another random freestyle let me know what yall think?
and y is it always rain matrix that responds to my stuff? yall need 2 respond more often cause he tends 2 kick my @$$ :happy:




nice shit dude....I like ya stuff alot.....n multis are juss great.....what u need to work on is polish ya corners n enhance on ya vocab,,,,to spit some more sophisticate shit...

props dude...
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nice

Postby Sleepy » Nov 26th, '06, 11:52

:smoking: :smoking: nice drops

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Re: nice

Postby Marth » Nov 26th, '06, 13:11

go back bitches, take some shit of the grocery
you don't like me? so what this is what i'm suppose to be
so you roasted me, biatch it's all close for me
go back and be friendly, bring a rose to me

cuz when i get angry you don't want me close
i'll punch litterly at ya nose ill beat all my foes

I'm the one who might like to write lirycs in a fight
no, i more want to be quiet in da night when soldiers come around at da light

what ever, i just had time left to write sumtin
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Re: nice

Postby Infliction » Nov 26th, '06, 14:37

Marth wrote:go back bitches, take some shit of the grocery
you don't like me? so what this is what i'm suppose to be
so you roasted me, biatch it's all close for me
go back and be friendly, bring a rose to me

cuz when i get angry you don't want me close
i'll punch litterly at ya nose ill beat all my foes

I'm the one who might like to write lirycs in a fight
no, i more want to be quiet in da night when soldiers come around at da light

what ever, i just had time left to write sumtin



Okay, so last time I checked in rap battles we didnt talk about the super market
Your shit is garbage, Imma light you up like a fat blunt, just sparked it
I'll leave you as a mutilated carcus, I'll stomp you while you down like Marcus
As in Vick, Florida Gators, I'll leave you so fucked up, you best be callin me the dillapadater
Im an instigator, I'll drop lines like Bobby Probert dropped his gloves back in the day
The blood on my knuckles comes from ya nose
I'll stomp ya mouth till ya teeth pierce ya lip and keep it permenantly closed
Like it been sewn, I'm known for tearin' Mc's in two
I keep my style fresh so that you know that I'm true
My homies come first, I stick to my crew and they stick back like glue
I heard some wack cat spewin' somethin' bout scat and a grandma, who the fuck is you?
Talkin' bout eatin' poo, you gotta get those screws tightened in your skull
To keep ya brain in place, I'll sell you weed thats laced wit crack and nuclear waste
Once you die I'll send ya body to the glue factory and you'll become white paste
I aint even puttin' effort into this shit, its a little sample taste
Its over now, I murdered yall, time to close the case


No hate or nun, just spittin' some freestyle. Good rhymes from all yall, keep this thread going.
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Re: nice

Postby Marth » Nov 26th, '06, 15:06

no marcus, only marco, marco polo or pollo
go back to your "myspace" or to the apollo
when i go online, i'm checking my hotmail
but when you go, you're checking for hot males
i'll just make ya dead, maybe i like it,
to get ya mad, yeh, but it be might shit
so you want me to pop shit in ya face
i don't like niga's or gays from another race
men, i don't understand it
Damn this time you've luck faggit
I don't handle ya to hard
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Postby Enimee » Nov 26th, '06, 17:06

your just a snake and your drop are fake readin it makes my eyes ache
for spittin that, your body ill brake loopy from the pills i take you have no idea whats at stake

dont give a fuck no more cuz like kez im Insane Brain Damaged And Broke
my rhymes'll make you choke all the while your chicks on my cock with a new stroke

im wonderin where the fuck she learned this she gave me your weed of course i burned it with out a second of hesitation im the only rapper wholl shoot you while levitatin

cause im a magician an illusionist have you and your homies wishin you could do this but you cant, itss easy but your just stupid if you ever write another rhyme like em ill be pukin

and not because im love sick but cause your raps are shit
that shit makes my eyes bleed readin it i see your neck and i snap it



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Re: nice

Postby MoBrat » Nov 26th, '06, 17:08

Marth wrote:when i go online, i'm checking my hotmail
but when you go, you're checking for hot males
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marth u gotta stop copying Jins work guy cause u lost my respect with that shit
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Postby Marth » Nov 26th, '06, 17:15

enimee, female side of eminem?
i punch this time with a battering ram

why you wanna challenge me, you don't wanna batle me
go to your carpet box and sell one dollar batteries

me again, i just Spell fast, and spell ya to bellfast, post a spell cast
and you go to hell hah!, I sell ya, to tell ya, that there's more then just that well ma!

and i'l not use other lines any more, but show some respect to me
do you expect to see, that if ya challenge marth, it's ya destiny
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Postby MoBrat » Nov 26th, '06, 17:18

Marth wrote:enimee, female side of eminem?
i punch this time with a battering ram

why you wanna challenge me, you don't wanna batle me
go to your carpet box and sell one dollar batteries

me again, i just Spell fast, and spell ya to bellfast, post a spell cast
and you go to hell hah!, I sell ya, to tell ya, that there's more then just that well ma!


i dont mean 2 be a prick but guy u suck stop copying other ppls shit that batterries line was from a jin battle some white guy said that and then jin destroyed him man make ur own shit im never voting 4 u again guy ur worse then me and i just started not long ago i like jins battles so dont use that shit in here cause i know most of them :tounge2:
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