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Postby kevin420fucku » Nov 29th, '06, 06:06

i am a good rapper
your ryhmes are poop, they belong in the crapper
i will shoot you with my gun
you will be scared and run
i also deal cocaine and other drugs
when im pimpin' the women, i get plenty hugs
yo im ridin in a gangster car
your car is slow, it wont get too far
im blinged out with a necklace from the dollar tree
i am a gangster, you will see.


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Postby Jdogg06 » Nov 29th, '06, 06:19

damn that shit was fresh as fuck/
ur the best and i suck/
bitch im bein sarcastic/
ur rims are so fake it looks like ur whole cars plasitc/
i ride on 36's, i can drive fine but im swirvy vicious/
i got weed drink and some dirty bitches/
so dont try to tell me what is up/
u think ur good but u suck/
fine one other guy that can tell u other wise/
ur just plain horrible/
i hate ur family cept ur mom that whore is cool/
but thats enough said/
u mine as well be just dead/
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Postby 604pn0i » Nov 29th, '06, 06:58

haha thats the thing hommie all you get is hugs
ill laugh at you right before i fill you wit slugs
and ima stick with jdogg, that shit was weak
something about my shit that is unique
so son expand yur vocabulary
pull a baby outta you, like the virgin Marry
yur chain is from the doller store and you know it
so bad you should get a jewlery permit
now thats enough, im done dissing you
running scared, moves to Kalamazoo



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Postby Enimee » Nov 29th, '06, 23:09

yall spit on people who wont spit back
yall smoke weed? heres a tab hit that
cause my acid get you blunted and crazed
then my verbs'll get you hunted and slayed
i aint waitin for shit im the predator your the prey
isnt this a fun game im jeffery domer and im hungrey
if im that then your loraina bobit didnt they revoked your oral sex
so stop spittin cause every tim youve wrote a rhyme you choked on my dick and wanted more of it
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Postby kevin420fucku » Nov 30th, '06, 00:44

u bitches kno i was just jokin
fuck yeah enimee i enjoy tokin
i got more flow than a river
ur ryhmes so cold they makin me shiver
u ask me to bring it bitch ill deliver
ill kill any mother fucker in the vacinity
u rape 5 year olds to lose your virginity
i tried to fuck ur mom in her clit
but that shit was too loose my dick wouldnt fit
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Postby Enimee » Nov 30th, '06, 01:19

ok i cant stand this any longer i gotta expose your secret
your not a rapper your just a pissed off stand up comedian who stopped speakin

cause your shits first grade, i mean the rhymes you use
you'll need first aid, from the shit i grew

ill fuckin demolish you like a brick buildin cause im a wreckin ball
you worse then negative infinity plus a million mad cause im steppin tall
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Postby Mc Cubz » Nov 30th, '06, 04:19

chek its cubz I feel the need to teach these people
forget lies about gangsterism lets try and beat the evil
that roams in socitety and chokes the love and respect
I come to set the pace, from my soul, so you couldnt reject,
I would have been wrecked if I did'nt have this music
so stop raping what I love and need, dont abuse-this
I'm the coolest rapper in the game, this goes without saying
I want to make tr great, without hate, that only amounts to slaying
the fountain is spraying see I've not took my hand of the keyboard
I flow from the soul, its a natural process like freeze-thaw
I seen your lines and felt like me previously you are disillusoned
If you feel the need to appear gangster, then your-grip your loosing
I wish you'd be choosing to keep to your truest feelings
and then like me your lines would never lose meaning
I shouldn't choose feeding of kids lines like a preacher
but like I said, I felt sorry for you, and so I had to teach-ya!
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Postby Jdogg06 » Nov 30th, '06, 04:28

ur name is chubz enough said
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Postby kevin420fucku » Nov 30th, '06, 04:29

bitch this battle is just startin
if im in first grade ur in kindergarten
ok fucker lets have a discussion
leave ur brain hurtin like u got a concussion
i'll kill your ass like a nazi killed a jew
leave ur whole fuckin face black and blue
dont be fooled by my locality
you will be just another fatality
this aint a joke bitch its reality
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Postby Mc Cubz » Nov 30th, '06, 04:31

Jdogg06 wrote:ur name is chubz enough said


chek ye my name is cubz wich is a nickname I had from my birthname for years; you are the one with a bad name. I mean, how many guys are there with dogg in there name, snoop dogg, kdog, nate dogg, fuking hell weres the origionality, theres enough said in my verse, if you feel threatened by me I'm sorry, you should probs just go and join rapdogs, you guys arent taking over tr with this sorta hate, not at all bro! I got love for all so safe ye but please dont try and be ripping me cos its kinda stupid.
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Postby Jdogg06 » Nov 30th, '06, 04:35

fuck u chubz u dont no me
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Postby Mc Cubz » Nov 30th, '06, 04:49

kevin420fucku wrote:bitch this battle is just startin
if im in first grade ur in kindergarten
ok fucker lets have a discussion
leave ur brain hurtin like u got a concussion
i'll kill your ass like a nazi killed a jew
leave ur whole fuckin face black and blue
dont be fooled by my locality
you will be just another fatality
this aint a joke bitch its reality


What you mean this is reality
if you could kill me then please try all I need is an escape
you plan to hate taking about fatalities
but I think its obvious your fake just face your mentalities
that are somehow decieved
your trapped by piers but I come out and lead
I to could know you black and blue, maybe even faceless
you have no idea I'm massive as around I weightlift
but this place-is racist and faithless I cant take-this
thats why I put you down in your place like a rapist
while I make-hits so great I'm making you dance
read carefully, pay attention, or I'll put you in a concentration camp
anyway why do you chose to be a nazi
you chat mack, see me I only use the facts 'g'
when I'm spitting scriptures iller than sickness
scale-tipping on richters' ripping you bitches
within you own shit, and I've not even begun to go sick
cos If I did youd all run back to where your home is
not coping but anyway I find an end fam I need to revise for exams
haha I came down on you, next time mind your head man!
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Postby Restlesswon » Dec 1st, '06, 02:31

lol @ this thread
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Postby Jdogg06 » Dec 1st, '06, 06:21

all u bitches know, i got rythem and flow, its all systems go,
everytime i spit,my rhymes are the shit,they all wine and bitch,
cuz there jealous, its like havin a hot dog and addin relish,
i gotta be perfect,crazy as tidal waves on the sea surface,
growin up i had no choice i had to be worthless,
i had no control, so i started on the flow patrol,
these bitches have no soul,spittin solo,
no help needed, u have no chance mine as well be seated,
right now the oven is just pre heated,but its gonna get hotter belive it,
but all the haters dont make me blame this,i just got a better chance of bein famous,
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Postby Kez » Dec 1st, '06, 17:20

Why the fuck are you all making fun of this guy?/
Don't you realise that he struggled and tried/
Sitting at this computer for hours trying to think of a good enough rhyme/
Though it's still pointless, it's like you smuggling wine/
When you promised to bring booze that we would drink with a funnel at night/
And go out, push each other in the train station tunnel and dive/
Out of the way as the train comes chug-chugging by/
You posting wack rhymes here is like playin chicken, you just fuckin die!

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