Kez Vs Mobrat Vs Enimee (All dropped VOTE!)

by **Kez** » Dec 3rd, '06, 15:42

Right
10 lines
No crew votes or nothin
I'll drop once both check in
Oh yeah, first one to get 3 votes wins
No knockouts

by **MoBrat** » Dec 3rd, '06, 15:43

checking in

by **Enimee** » Dec 3rd, '06, 21:03

check

by **MoBrat** » Dec 3rd, '06, 21:22

come on matt ur facing mo brat i got this shit down in-fact
i watched how u swing when up 2 bat dont u see what im getting-at
i'll kidnap ur sister-emma now u got a big-dilemma save ur self or her
i dont have 2 confer my plan 2 take out this clan
just another eminem fan both like-stan got a 5minute strike-span
cause im 1 of the elite-few that'll eat-u alive u wont survive
u might as well take 5 to-write lookin in ur eyes i see new-fright
is it cause what i say is right or cause of the infrared light
enimee u cant even ignite-the-flame fuck it i really despite-this-dame
kill u like a chess-game u'll feel less-shame cuz u'll always be the no-name

by **Kez** » Dec 3rd, '06, 22:29

I strike a pose and pull out a fuckin mike and blow
Into it and still do better than you do even if you bite from those
Who have made it in the industry, people who have been with me
But broke off when they found out i made them look too shit to be
Signed, that's what happened with you guys
Except you don't need me to make you look shit, even people with no eyes
Can see that, you're straining so hard your mind's in a twiz (sp?)
Cause you know you sound worse than a rapper who raps in silence that is shit!
Censorship can sometimes be a good thing like when it lets such tits
Like Enimee and MoBrat be silenced before they attempt to spit!

by **,-,'-{Bar}-',-,** » Dec 3rd, '06, 22:35

those both hot drops goni be a intresting battle

by **MoBrat** » Dec 3rd, '06, 22:36

its gonna be a good battle and thanks 4 the comment

by **Enimee** » Dec 3rd, '06, 22:42

look at these two goons, walkin round in fantasy thinkin they can rap
watch me make there blood ooze, dark profound wearin a mud cap
that last rhyme left a scratch, but ive spit harder on the ground and it was gouged deeper
thats the last time you'll spit back, cause im farther up the mound and madder then an aroused sleeper
shoulda thunk twice before fucking with this, cause kez is about to be sucking these "tits"
woulda sunk ships but i spit nice so im rocking this bitch, mobrat cant rap he should switch to hopping on dicks
im intelectualy superior your just inferior, your junk stunk so bad the hole crowd will stand clear of ya
im disectin ths criteria the voters are shy of hearin ya, mad cause i jumped this punk and started sheerin ya
usin your skin graph as a coat, i laugh at what cha wrote
cause your last rap couldnt even rock the boat, while mines put holes in this music note

by **,-,'-{Bar}-',-,** » Dec 3rd, '06, 23:27

ok well since i got like a member of my group a guy i hate and i guy i respect in this i guess i got to breakdown all so theres no moaning

MoBrat

come on matt ur facing mo brat i got this shit down in-fact
i watched how u swing when up 2 bat dont u see what im getting-at

nice rythming nothing special no punch or anything though

i'll kidnap ur sister-emma now u got a big-dilemma save ur self or her
i dont have 2 confer my plan 2 take out this clan
just another eminem fan both like-stan got a 5minute strike-span

Nice flowing on the rythming, good rythming, was building up for a big punch but got let down nice referal to stan though when you check there's avvys they mostly got eminem so thats nice

cause im 1 of the elite-few that'll eat-u alive u wont survive
u might as well take 5 to-write lookin in ur eyes i see new-fright
is it cause what i say is right or cause of the infrared light

good rythming but no battle in it really no personels or anything not a good punch

enimee u cant even ignite-the-flame fuck it i really despite-this-dame
kill u like a chess-game u'll feel less-shame cuz u'll always be the no-name

great rythming, calling out his name good, good punch ,nice multi,s you best lines and a great way to end

Kez

I strike a pose and pull out a fuckin mike and blow
Into it and still do better than you do even if you bite from those
Who have made it in the industry, people who have been with me
But broke off when they found out i made them look too shit to be
Signed, that's what happened with you guys
Except you don't need me to make you look shit, even people with no eyes
Can see that, you're straining so hard your mind's in a twiz (sp?)
Cause you know you sound worse than a rapper who raps in silence that is shit!
Censorship can sometimes be a good thing like when it lets such tits
Like Enimee and MoBrat be silenced before they attempt to spit!

you flow your shit awesomely so i got to say it as a whole......great flow rythming is at your usual nice standard....your punches arent anything awesome and not many personels....although overall yours is really good because its liek a sorta story ( i forget the word you use for this but ill find it) and you lead on to one big punch witch doesnt fail......

enimee

look at these two goons, walkin round in fantasy thinkin they can rap
watch me make there blood ooze, dark profound wearin a mud cap
that last rhyme left a scratch, but ive spit harder on the ground and it was gouged deeper
thats the last time you'll spit back, cause im farther up the mound and madder then an aroused sleeper
shoulda thunk twice before fucking with this, cause kez is about to be sucking these "tits"
woulda sunk ships but i spit nice so im rocking this bitch, mobrat cant rap he should switch to hopping on dicks
im intelectualy superior your just inferior, your junk stunk so bad the hole crowd will stand clear of ya
im disectin ths criteria the voters are shy of hearin ya, mad cause i jumped this punk and started sheerin ya
usin your skin graph as a coat, i laugh at what cha wrote
cause your last rap couldnt even rock the boat, while mines put holes in this music note

again you join all your lines so ill do as a whole......you have the most punches by far....your rythming is good but not the best in the battle....like i saye you had alot of punches but not many hard ones....some stuff just left me like WTF....also your structure sucks....and even though you join all your lines your flow aint all there coz the structure...

overall i give my vote to kez his overall rythming, build up, and great flow won it, also his one big punch i really liked

id have to say mobrat has improved the most since his alst battle i read so keep it up man :worship:

also enimee.....you got the stuff just no flow or structure work on that and you would have won this battle by far

and dam ya'll better achknowlegde my breakdown ( my finegrs hurting from typing :'(

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lol

by **Enimee** » Dec 3rd, '06, 23:33

ok yeah good vote thanks man

by **MoBrat** » Dec 4th, '06, 00:19

thanks 4 the detailed vote [1-0-0 for Kez]

by **C-Game** » Dec 4th, '06, 09:11

damn bars break down is wicked

ill start with mobrat
liked ur addded complexity in the battle
but u didnt do the main thing in a triple threat
u focused on one mainly
ur drop was a through out diss to enimee and some common punches
but i liked these lines
ur mulites are good tooo

just another eminem fan both like-stan got a 5minute strike-span
cause im 1 of the elite-few that'll eat-u alive u wont survive

enimees drop
well the rhymin was thr
not up 2 mobrats standards
he docused on humour and punches
i liked it

look at these two goons, walkin round in fantasy thinkin they can rap
watch me make there blood ooze, dark profound wearin a mud cap
that last rhyme left a scratch, but ive spit harder on the ground and it was gouged deeper
thats the last time you'll spit back, cause im farther up the mound and madder then an aroused sleeper

nice start man
nice

im intelectualy superior your just inferior, your junk stunk so bad the hole crowd will stand clear of ya

thr u go another nice one

kez
great stuff from u
no direct disses but kept it common and goin on
last lines was a good punch

Can see that, you're straining so hard your mind's in a twiz (sp?)
Cause you know you sound worse than a rapper who raps in silence that is shit!
Censorship can sometimes be a good thing like when it lets such tits
Like Enimee and MoBrat be silenced before they attempt to spit!

but kez wat im sayin is where was ur multies that makes ur stuff superior and stuff
u did punches but with less writin prowess

so here is ma vote

punches - kez/enimee
rhymes - mobrat
strucutre - kez / mobrat
multies - mobrat / a lil from enimee
humour - enimee / kez
personal - mobrat
complexity - enimees vocab
flow - kez / enimee
triple threat aspect - enimee ( focused on both better )

final vote Enimee

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by **Enimee** » Dec 6th, '06, 02:32

cooool, k MORE VOTES, thanks cgame

by **ShadyGD26** » Dec 6th, '06, 06:23

dead serious every line i read starting from the top my mouth dropped a lil each time tht was straight up ill...

Mo Brat-very personal sweet multis an flow

come on matt ur facing mo brat i got this shit down in-fact
i watched how u swing when up 2 bat dont u see what im getting-at

Kez-----sweet punches....

I strike a pose and pull out a fuckin mike and blow
Into it and still do better than you do even if you bite from those

Enimee--crazy flow

woulda sunk ships but i spit nice so im rocking this bitch, mobrat cant rap he should switch to hopping on dicks

I kno I didn't break it down as much as the next guy so....but I dunno I'm feelin Enimee's more....so

my vote --> Enimee
but sweet drops everyone major props :worship:

by **Enimee** » Dec 8th, '06, 23:20

thanks whats that 2-1-0? favor of me? VOTTTTTTESSSSSSS

Kez Vs Mobrat Vs Enimee (All dropped VOTE!)

Kez Vs Mobrat Vs Enimee (All dropped VOTE!)

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