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LW: Mc-Flawless vs DJ dunno ( Voting CLOSED!)

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LW: Mc-Flawless vs DJ dunno ( Voting CLOSED!)

Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Jan 15th, '07, 18:59

Post count 30 + AND
Registered on or before December 25th 2006
Simple votes like I vote X is not accpeted
must give a brief description on why u voted him OR/AND
vote on ALL/ SOME of these categories

FLOW
STRUCTURE
PUNCHES
MULTIES
RHYMES
VOCAB
COMPLEXITY
NAMEPLAY
OTHER( enjoyment ,metaphores , creativity anythin u can think off)

4 votes to win
3-0 KO



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MC-Flawless

I'll leave this kid battered like a fish wrappered,
He's a shit rapper, Like sendin' gifts with shit splattered,
Thick bastard don't even know his own name,
Shootin' at dudes with raw game like a gun blown with no aim,
So ashamed of his raps he's referred as DJ,
Dude bought his real tape, got scared and repaid when he heard it replayed!


---------------

DJ dunno
speakin of the best, im the KiDD, the type to HAULT-RHYMERS
im movin, but i keep this dudes BACKHAND STIFF like-ALZHEIMERS

can i have the atantion this is an inspection of infections
, you need an injection, biatch, it's just a protection you're having dislection

Mc menace, you mean the phantom menace episode one of star wars
let's go to the next episode* cmon biatch show me, at wich bar ya are

next episode ( dr. dre ft snoopdogg, it's a song )
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Postby Infliction » Jan 15th, '07, 20:22

Neither followed the proper writing techniques...


FLOW - Flawless
STRUCTURE - DJ Dunno
PUNCHES - Flawless
MULTIES - Flawless
RHYMES - Flawless
VOCAB - Flawless
COMPLEXITY - Dj Dunno
NAMEPLAY - Flawless
OTHER (Enjoyment etc.) - Flawless


Overall: 7-2 Flawless

Both were good, but flawless' was just overall better.
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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Jan 15th, '07, 20:23

again what rules were broken :sweating:
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Postby Infliction » Jan 15th, '07, 20:24

lol :p Again, upper case letters.
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Postby Rain Matrix » Jan 15th, '07, 20:24

FLOW-flawless
STRUCTURE-tie
PUNCHES-flawless
MULTIES-flawless
RHYMES-tie
VOCAB-tie
COMPLEXITY-flawless had tha scheme
NAMEPLAY-flawless
OTHER-dunno attempted some good shit but could have pulled it off better so my vote is 4 flawless

~1~ keep voting
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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Jan 15th, '07, 20:26

plaspp wrote:lol :p Again, upper case letters.


no capataliving rythms is allowed


just not allowed to capatalize the first letter of every word

or

to have everyhting in capitals


you may say some of the caatilzed words dont rythm..i was thinking that but thats the mc's problem if he doesnt know that
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Postby C-Game » Jan 15th, '07, 20:27

oh that
he has used to emphasize rhymes
thats allowed


but imma consider to remove that in da next round
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Postby MoBrat » Jan 16th, '07, 01:05

plaspp wrote:
FLOW - Flawless
STRUCTURE - DJ Dunno
PUNCHES - Flawless
MULTIES - Flawless
RHYMES - Flawless
VOCAB - Flawless
COMPLEXITY - Dj Dunno
NAMEPLAY - Flawless
OTHER (Enjoyment etc.) - Flawless


Overall: 7-2 Flawless


i agree his had better flow and punches and his last line made me laugh even tho his lines weren't set up properly i vote 4 FLAWLESS
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Postby $0 R3@L » Jan 16th, '07, 01:13

FLOW: mc flawless

STRUCTURE: dj dunno

PUNCHES: dj dunno

MULTIES: mc flawless

RHYMES : dj dunno

VOCAB: dj dunno

COMPLEXITY : dj dunno

NAMEPLAY : mc flawless

OTHER: this line 'speakin of the best, im the KiDD, the type to HAULT RHYMERS im movin, but i keep this dudes BACKHAND STIFF like-ALZHEIMERS ' pretty much won me over


dj dunno gets my vote but great work both,it was a close battle.
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Postby MoBrat » Jan 16th, '07, 01:16

thanks 4 voting but it was a KO before u voted :whistle:
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Postby $0 R3@L » Jan 16th, '07, 01:21

MoBrat wrote:thanks 4 voting but it was a KO before u voted :whistle:


sumone should lock em wen the battles over,thats just common sense sureley??? :confusion: oh well

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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Jan 16th, '07, 02:24

soz was watching saw

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