McMaybe vs Bar (vote now)

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

16 lines, kool gimme a bit n ill drop im tryna get sarah to do a intro for me

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

lately maybe been lazy like maybe he aint the maybe he may be,
i slay b with crazy shit take out his lasy spit you green coz you recyle it,
with physco spit, syce go shit, submit admit permit or commit, you aint legit,
you a wanne be battle rapper but you cant even rattle wrapper am a cattle trapper,
you a sleapless in seatlle snapper, a chick flick you thick prick you aint a slick trick,
lets jump back and learn code, you a chump wack a burn explode,
a full load, you still green a seen you waiting for a girl, you a toad,
youll never amount to rap, you a dung beatle, only thing you a mount is crap,
i dont need to throw a punch with you, all you need is a slap
lets go for a brunch or two, n ill spit you back out like a crunch in stew,
there aint no rapper like you, i agree, no one could strike me so blue,
red pink orange, bled brink door hinge you swinging to much
like 50 you got to sing to touch you think you a king of clutch,
fuck battle lets wrestle ill settle this with my vessel bitch
i dont descriminate a eliminate incirminate you a bitch to hate
lets wipe the slate im ripe to plate you got hype but you to late



i predict another Bar vs Mc Cubz here, but atleast i aint scared to try lol

g/l maybe, not that you need it but im a nice guy lol

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

Il hand it to you bar, your verse wasnt bad at all....i acctualy had to put some thought into my verse, your probably one of the 5 best i battled yet

ill take that as a compliment

and you killed me man your verse was awesome

what words did i use wrong though i dont wanne fuck myself up in the future nnd idk i cant notice none so maybe i got them for different meanings or somehting

[NoLimitWordz]

dont really have time to break it down right now.... I thought your drop was good Bar....best ive seen in awhile from you (altho i havent really checked here that often lately lol) but Maybe killed it...so i had to give him my vote here....good battle tho

[$0 R3@L]

bar won on the basis maybes was obviously a pre-write up.His verse didnt even contain one jab at bar from what i could see....whereas bar,although maybe not lyrically, but diss wise won the battle.

[$0 R3@L]

what im sayin is that verse could be used on every single person in this forum,it just wernt personal enough to be used in a battle.I dunno just my feed and reason my vote goes bar your verse is nice but not for a battle.

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

ok well its 1-1

im guessing we just completely different type of battlers i try to think of perseonel shit, even though its fails coz i contradicted myself if i sayed anything about your music ask sarah i wrote it while istening to the tape thomas mode

but keep votes coming

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

god damn it people vote, please?

lots of lines, only certain few vote on bigger battles for some reason

[4D]

god damn it people vote, please?

When was the last time you voted in this section man, can't be all take and no give.

[4D]

true, but i contribute alot to this forum, and i vote here once in a while, i havnt voted recently, because iv been busy, as im not anymore

Sure I understand man, drop a few votes now and again if you get the chance, you should know yourself, it's very annoying when people don't vote in your battle, and it goes on forever.

My Vote:
Flow - Bar
Multies - Tie
Rhymes - Tie
Punches - Bar
Complexity - Mc Maybe
Nameplay/Personals - Bar, but both hadn't many personals or nameplay


Rhymes and multies were pretty good by both, flow was also, but think bar's flowed slightly better. I kind of agreed about what Mc Maybe said about Bar using words wrong, but then was surprised to see Mybe doing some of the same shit, a lot of the rhymes in your verse man, seem to be their just for complexity or to make it look sick, but they don't work too well. For that reason and the lack of nameplay or personals, I've given the vote to Bar. But, it was very close, nice battle!

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

true, but i contribute alot to this forum, and i vote here once in a while, i havnt voted recently, because iv been busy, as im not anymore

Sure I understand man, drop a few votes now and again if you get the chance, you should know yourself, it's very annoying when people don't vote in your battle, and it goes on forever.

My Vote:
Flow - Bar
Multies - Tie
Rhymes - Tie
Punches - Bar
Complexity - Mc Maybe
Nameplay/Personals - Bar, but both hadn't many personals or nameplay


Rhymes and multies were pretty good by both, flow was also, but think bar's flowed slightly better. I kind of agreed about what Mc Maybe said about Bar using words wrong, but then was surprised to see Mybe doing some of the same shit, a lot of the rhymes in your verse man, seem to be their just for complexity or to make it look sick, but they don't work too well. For that reason and the lack of nameplay or personals, I've given the vote to Bar. But, it was very close, nice battle!

thanx for breaking it down


what is it 3 the winner or 5 ?

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

i dont know, but i guess we might as well make it 2, because no ones votin, so congratz bar, you beat me fair and square

ok then, your call man, good battle

[4D]

i dont know, but i guess we might as well make it 2, because no ones votin, so congratz bar, you beat me fair and square

Cool to see someone gracious in defeat for a change. But, I think you shold let it take it's course, might have a chance of winning this, both verse are really very equal.

[D@vid]

true, but i contribute alot to this forum, and i vote here once in a while, i havnt voted recently, because iv been busy, as im not anymore

Sure I understand man, drop a few votes now and again if you get the chance, you should know yourself, it's very annoying when people don't vote in your battle, and it goes on forever.

My Vote:
Flow - Bar
Multies - Tie
Rhymes - Tie
Punches - Bar
Complexity - Mc Maybe
Nameplay/Personals - Bar, but both hadn't many personals or nameplay


Rhymes and multies were pretty good by both, flow was also, but think bar's flowed slightly better. I kind of agreed about what Mc Maybe said about Bar using words wrong, but then was surprised to see Mybe doing some of the same shit, a lot of the rhymes in your verse man, seem to be their just for complexity or to make it look sick, but they don't work too well. For that reason and the lack of nameplay or personals, I've given the vote to Bar. But, it was very close, nice battle!

i agree with u except that i think maybe's did have a nice flow even though he did maybe overdo it with the word play. if possible, i would have to say tie. its just so hard to vote cuz one had something better, but then had something worse too, so it makes it hard to vote if that makes any sense.