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New Punchline Cypher

Postby ThomasAguanis » Sep 20th, '05, 21:30

i liked the idea in creative writing so i'll ressurect the topic here. same rules as before:
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diss the person above you with two lines
and dont post 2 in a row wait untill someone responds.

i'll start. i've used this before just not on tr. it sort of sucks but perfest for starting things off.


my rhymes are better than all these posts YES ALL OF THEM/ ThomasAguanis pretends you're eggs i'm STRAIGHT POACHIN MEN!/
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Postby V-DogDaMenace » Sep 21st, '05, 02:40

These POTENT SENTENCES SLAY THE BEST, I COMPOSE THE SICKEST WHEN MAKIN' TEXT, THE MOTIVED MISSION OF STATED DEATH, will "knock you into check" like JAHOVA WITNESSES PLAYIN' CHESS!!!


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Postby 5lim5hady » Sep 21st, '05, 03:40

im the latest and the greatist, the lyrical rap rapist slash satanist, casting spells upon v-dog da menace for being unattentive, u should receive a life in prison sentence for ur jahova's sentence.
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Postby HAYZI » Sep 22nd, '05, 17:19

when it comes to crunchtime yous couldnt pull out a punchline
if you punched a fat kid in the lunchline
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Postby Darjan333 » Sep 22nd, '05, 17:33

Lunchtime?!Man,you have to be kidding...You have just licked my dick,
And now you wanna pudding?Man,put yourself on "sticked up chick"!

lol :D
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Postby HAYZI » Sep 22nd, '05, 17:45

yo darjan i kno your on my dick like a cheap tart, damn,
but your words mean less than a weak fart man
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Postby Darjan333 » Sep 22nd, '05, 17:52

weak fart still stinks,but not more than your mom,
your weenie now shrinks,and you taste like rotten cum...
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Postby HAYZI » Sep 22nd, '05, 20:49

imna be backslappin you back to front
you cunt you wack...but i can spit it front to back
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Postby ThomasAguanis » Sep 22nd, '05, 20:58

HAYZI, you may be able to spit UPandDOWN but I can spit AROUND.
you're just a SLUT and CLOWN, when i'm done spittin you'll be on the GROUND

haha :lol:
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Postby HAYZI » Sep 22nd, '05, 21:02

what i say about up and down? you got this front to back
your momma likes her luvvin brown- in the back not front
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Postby ThomasAguanis » Sep 22nd, '05, 21:11

damn it i posted that wrong it was supposed to be somwethng like this:

HAYZI you may be able to spit FRONT and BACK but i spit all AROUND
you're a CUNT and your punchlines are WHACK, and when i'm done spittin you'll be on the GROUND.

and for the last one:

lovin brown is what she likes unlike the REST
oh wait your mom likes it to when we fucked she called me the BEST
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Postby HAYZI » Sep 22nd, '05, 21:16

not even gonna reply to that :wink:
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Postby ThomasAguanis » Sep 22nd, '05, 21:27

HAYZI wrote:not even gonna reply to that :wink:


haha. that last one i posted was garbage. i admit it. :lol:
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Postby HAYZI » Sep 22nd, '05, 21:28

you got it :P :lol:
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Postby ThomasAguanis » Sep 22nd, '05, 21:33

ok um..

the LAST one sucked shit i ADMIT that i'm not gonna LIE
i CRASHED it was SHIT but i came back i'm not gonna DIE


well that one sucked but was better than the last one haha.it should get this back on track.
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