Enimee vs me (emineman)

by **Tash8** » Mar 14th, '07, 00:10

yea okay so 4 bar...

i'll post after enimee..

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by **Enimee** » Mar 14th, '07, 00:16

4 barz dats straight unlike this gay representation of the fag race
emineman wtf is that i thought my name was modeled afta him u prolly keep a picture of his face

on the wall in your bedroom, 5 by 5 like da cell cuz u have no life
ull die arive in hell to watch me and saddam give it hard 2 ur wife

im sick with this non simplistic shit u ride on the 6 inches of dick
that hide like the trouser snake inside my cut off levi's spit

is wut u like lyrical fire instrumental tack its a mental pact a dental act
that has me claimin ur wack and so's dem dudes in audio battles cuz like rain matrix i bent u back

by **Tash8** » Mar 14th, '07, 00:24

your rap skills are worthless, all of your disses are hurtless,
i haven't rapped in a while but i'll beat you cuz i've missed this

your pathetic, your rhymes cause me anesthetic,
it's not that their powerful, it's just their fake but mine are authentic

and I'm hungry to exhume you from yo' grave,
cuz i've killed you once and i'm ready for another wave,

you fake styles to try to hide the truth so you clutch your guise
but to level me you'll need to mind the youth and need much more disguise

VOTE NOW!

by **Enimee** » Mar 14th, '07, 01:55

wow alot better then i expected but not good enuff

lolz im bein a dick i know

ok VOTEZ BITCHES

by **,-,'-{Bar}-',-,** » Mar 14th, '07, 01:56

yeh emin..uh whatev his name is, you did good better than i thought but you were overpowered by enimee's expirence but was a good battle

My vote: enimee, he just came stronger

by **D@vid** » Mar 14th, '07, 02:01

Bar wrote:yeh emin..uh whatev his name is, you did good better than i thought but you were overpowered by enimee's expirence but was a good battle

My vote: enimee, he just came stronger

i agree. emineman did better than me for one of his first battles, i think this is at least. thats not saying much, but it was good for a beginner

@ enimee i liked that saddam line :laughing:

by **Tash8** » Mar 14th, '07, 03:30

thanks yea, i expected to get killed on my first one, but you gotta do the first one to get to the second so yea..

i'll try again later

so 2-0 for now.

by **bfence** » Mar 14th, '07, 04:37

multis - Enimee
flow - emineman
punches - Enimee
personals - Enimee
Final vote - Enimee

I really hope Enimee was takin it easy on emineman because hes THAT much more experienced lol.

from enimee i liked the bar...
im sick with this non simplistic shit u ride on the 6 inches of dick
that hide like the trouser snake inside my cut off levi's spit

This had potential but i didnt flow right and i was hoping for more multis in the last line of it...
4 barz dats straight unlike this gay representation of the fag race
emineman wtf is that i thought my name was modeled afta him u prolly keep a picture of his face

As for emineman...
I feel like your bars are generic and rhyme for the sake of rhyming. Also try and feed your lines into the other. Like instead of...

and I'm hungry to exhume you from yo' grave,
cuz i've killed you once and i'm ready for another wave,

try something like

your rap skills are worthless, and all your disses which are hurtless,
you couldnt fuck me up if ya had the biggest dick in the world bitch

Notice how i used some multis (in bold and underlined) and i used wordplay(in red) like fuck me up as in whippin my ass or fuck me up as in sexually.

Just some constructive critisism no hate just tryin to help. Thats my two cents.

by **Tash8** » Mar 15th, '07, 23:52

thanks for the commments guys,

enimee wins 3-0.

Enimee vs me (emineman)

Enimee vs me (emineman)

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