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dhopkins224 vs iceaxe187 [3-0 -- iceaxe187]

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dhopkins224 vs iceaxe187 [3-0 -- iceaxe187]

Postby IceAxe » May 2nd, '07, 21:19

12 lines, im just setting up for later.

you post first, i will as soon as i can
Last edited by IceAxe on May 3rd, '07, 01:16, edited 2 times in total.
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Postby dhopkins224 » May 2nd, '07, 22:03

first one of my life dog, here it goes:


I
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I'm Infinite
you hearda hell well i was sent from it
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Postby IceAxe » May 2nd, '07, 22:08

your crap cant match the master's rate, get wrapped and slapped up at this date
try to flap a rap to map-equate but this sap is whack he's like a disaster place

i'll snap him straight lap this fake splat his face with bats this way
i spat this break better than your scat that's gay i captivate

com=bat this mate, the flow from my head like a Baptist way
your sums are lakin, eh you dont know who left you dead, fled fast away

im sicjk and on some other level boy, should've picked another devil ploy
rip it quick and uncover, cut a bevel, cloy this a wicked motherfuckin boy

demise you , cant slide through past shit applied new
it fries when threw chastise you, dont deny truth

when you leave, you'll need some ice packs from trice raps
then who bleeds and pleads, not iceaxe from trite crap


* trice - short unit of time [ heart beat/blink of an eye]
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Postby Hadez » May 2nd, '07, 22:26

FLOW: ice
STRUCTURE: ice
PUNCHES: ice
RHYMES: ice
MULTIS: ice
COMPEXITY: ice
VOCAB: ice

sorry hopkins, your verse was ok but it was very one sided.

vote: iceaxe187
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Postby James R. » May 2nd, '07, 22:43

Ice takes this hands down.

Hopkins your verse was average at best. At the end it was like you already accepted defeat and you were chasing your due compliments or something to that extent. It had some simplistic concepts but since your a 1st time battler it was decent, but Ice's was just overall better.

Ice your verse wasnt amazing but it was a better than average verse that definitely took this battle. I can see that you could probably come hard if you needed to, but I can see you took a laxed approach to this battle. Good shit man
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Postby IceAxe » May 2nd, '07, 22:51

James R. wrote:Ice your verse wasnt amazing but it was a better than average verse that definitely took this battle. I can see that you could probably come hard if you needed to, but I can see you took a laxed approach to this battle. Good shit man


Yeah, i know it wasnt amazing. I've been goin through a phase of shit battling, but i think im gettin better. and i did take it easy here, good call

more votes!
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Postby dhopkins224 » May 2nd, '07, 22:53

ice you deffinitly got skills. and im glad ppl are sayin' my verse was actually ok. props to u man that was tight
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Postby IceAxe » May 2nd, '07, 22:58

thanks, it's weird as hell. when i write somethin i think " this sucks so much" but then i post it, and get good feed...

anyway, just one more vote to make it official
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Postby Tash8 » May 3rd, '07, 01:01

i liked it ice, i think your coming back

and ice won this by far, like hadez and james said.
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Postby C-Game » May 3rd, '07, 17:04

good stuff dhopkinss.. u verse was pretty good... u matched ice in certain areas..


keep on practicin

da tourney will not start yet....so u have some practice time
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