LW2 UnbeatabILL vs Anthrax(Vote or ur PARENTS will be FED)

[C-Game]

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FLOW
STRUCTURE
PUNCHES
MULTIES
RHYMES
VOCAB
COMPLEXITY
NAMEPLAY
OTHER( enjoyment ,metaphores , creativity anythin u can think off)

3 votes to win



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[UnbeatabILL]


i got this man trapped, so stand back cause he can

[Hadez]

FLOW Unbeatable
STRUCTURE Unbeatable. i have to say somethin bout "Anthrax's" lines. his first two could EASILY be split in half. so to me it lookes like he jammed 4 lines into 2 of'em to get more into the verse, just my opinion.
PUNCHES anthrax
MULTIES anthrax
RHYMES anthrax
VOCAB anthrax
COMPLEXITY anthrax
NAMEPLAY both had it i guess, but anthrax was more clever with it
OTHER unbeatable, due to wut i said about the structure

vote: anthrax

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

FLOW- anthrax - but seriously man put in commas how do i know were to stop and take a breath if you dont have any ?????
STRUCTURE - tie
PUNCHES - andthrax
MULTIES -anthrax
RHYMES - anthrax
VOCAB - andthrax
COMPLEXITY - anthrax
NAMEPLAY - anthrax
OTHER - anthrax (made more sense than unbeatabill)

vote - anthrax

[4D]

I agree with both voters before me. Unbeatabill had a better flow and better structure, and soem nice multies too. But, Anthrax, had better multies, vocab, more complex rhyme scheme, and I agree with Bar and Hadez, the lines are too long to not have commas, apart from that Nice battle, of a high enough level, well wone both. Vote goes to Anthrax though, with almost identical cats as voters before me, I can post the cats if neccessary, but I don't think it is.

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

3-0 ko to anthrax

voting closed