LW2: 4-Word vs Link (VOTE)

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FLOW
STRUCTURE
PUNCHES
MULTIES
RHYMES
VOCAB
COMPLEXITY
NAMEPLAY
OTHER( enjoyment ,metaphores , creativity anythin u can think off)

3 votes to win



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4-word

i'll tell u in 4 words ur multies are faulty theres no link
maybe if u'd think u'd learn cause in a blink u'll burn

i'll will turn u to nothin n rip out ur insides including ur stuffin
lyrically im violent like football but no penelties for ruffin next time u talk say somethin

u got no talent call me a skeptic, im here to make the rap battles aseptic
if ur multies were effective maybe i could respect it, 6 lines n i made u pass out like an epileptic

Aseptic -- free from the living germs of disease
Epileptic -- a person affected by epilepsy


Link

dis MCs-hammerd wit 4words he cant-fuck-with,his shattered it goes "you cant-touch-dis"
i demand-punches n dis mans-tongue-gets numb-its makin his drop stink lyk vaginal fungus

this slug-fest leaves 4-wod wit no-words it shows-third strike your silenced, like the lambs
dont even fight,-ur-chance is inferior, no cat can grasp the facts even if ur lines-enhanced

ma advance punches got da cats-weighted I lyricaly castrated da 4-words faster than a blink
the disaster that i bring leaves the floor-wiped as this foe's-sniped by the master of the link

exp:

MC-Hammer - u cant touch this
stink <- wordplay
cats-weigted = categories on ma side
master of the link = the origin of where the link is located

[4D]

FLOW - Link,
STRUCTURE - Link
PUNCHES - Link
MULTIES - Link
RHYMES - Link
VOCAB - Tie, both had some uncommon words
COMPLEXITY - Link
NAMEPLAY - Link, both had some nameplays but 4Word won it imo

Good battle, I enjoyed both verses. 4Word ya just need to tighten your verse up and learn how to edit long lines down and cut out extra syllablles. You had some good multi's in the first 2 lines, but didn't really keep it constant throughout. Long lines and too many syllablles lost you the structure and FLow cats, inconsistent multi's lost you multi's, complexity and rhyme cats. That's 5 cats lost from two problems, if you can take this constructive critism on board and tweak your verse for next time round you could really be very good, 'cos as I said I enjoyed your verse, just lost the votes technically cos Link was just too good this time.

Vote: Link

[IceAxe]

Flow: Link
Structure: Link
Punches: Link - 4-Words was more generic and Link's were better
Multies: Link
Rhymes: Link
Vocab: 4 Words
Complexity: Link
Nameplay: Link - 4-Words had it only once in the first line
Other: Link - was more enjoyable overall

Vote goes to Link

[J Roc]

FLOW ::link by a bit
STRUCTURE::link
PUNCHES ::ima say a tie here
MULTIES::link
RHYMES::link...but 4 word was nice here...real talk i enjoyed them
VOCAB ::4-word...link was pretty good,but 4 word had more complex words
COMPLEXITY ::link
NAMEPLAY ::link
OTHER( enjoyment ,metaphores , creativity anythin u can think off)Link

addin up

2-8-Link

i enjoyed both drops...but if i look at cats...Link has it

[C-Game]

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and keepin da dieing LW2 alive