Doe Ray Me .:VS:. Bar [Vote Now]

[Doe Ray Me]

1 round, 3-0 = ko, if no ko, then first to 5 votes, 5 bars

dont bother me who goes first, imma have dinner first and then i'll drop mine

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

you can just put Bar in the title lol it looks weird qwith the gay ;-;- n stuff lol

and kool imma write it up now and ill drop in about 10-15

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

this is straight fate with a bit of desire so before its to late mate you should retire
ill rewire your brain till the fire that remain will burn yourself up like no sun screen in spain

dont get mad im a veteron son and i know in threat you hold none
i dont sweat you bold one, i poison you like mold does a old bun

i play you like pussy all day then you see i laugh at doe rae me
your so pussy you see a guy, bend over and start screaming, go, do me

whats with the negative commotion when you beg i give devotion
to your shredder, im disposing of the letters of emotion,hi stan,
is this a new form of promotion im a member of the fan site motion
dreaming of puting lotion on em's back, just remember your lines, thems wack



pssh that sucks oh well, good luck man

[Doe Ray Me]

Bar you aint gonna win-this-one, you gonna get ripped-apart, like hoes-in-an-orgy-bro
You throwing weak punches, they missin-son, mine will hit-ya-hard, like im flowing-in-audio

Dude this is my first battle-in-years, and i already got this shit-locked-down
Even got you sayin 'DAMN', the way im handling-this, bitch you ready to get-knocked-out?

Motherfucker i guess this-means-war, just like the shit-in-ya-sig
bitch im forever bringin-more, the way you actin, i swear your a bitch-with-a-dick

all i can do at moment, not be on for awhile, as i work nights, but if not enough i can drop some more soon, that aight Bar?


proberly shit but i jus dont give a fuck haha

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

^ yeh whatevers cool wiht ya man, nice drop btw

also change the title so its for vote now in it

[Doe Ray Me]

no votes yet, come on people

[4D]

If ye want votes I would suggest doing others the same favour, this place would be sweet if everybody who dropped in a battle, dropped a vote in an other. I'll drop a vote if I see ye voting in others.

[4D]

FLOW - Tie, both had decent flow
STRUCTURE - Doe Rae Me, it wasn't great but Bars was all over the shop.
PUNCHES - Doe Rae Me, but neither had very strong punches or personals
MULTIES - Doe Rae ME, both had a few good multies, but Doe Rae Me's were better.
RHYMES - Bar, had more rhymes
VOCAB - Tie, basic vocab in both verses
COMPLEXITY - Tie, Neither very complex
NAMEPLAY - Bar, Doe Rae Me hadn't any
OTHER - Doe Rae Me, Enjoyed it more, it was a technically better verse.

Votes go 7-5 to Doe Rae Me, and i`m gonna take 1 point off him for only posting six lines, but he still wins 6-5. Close battle, stay active people!

[IceAxe]

Basically on the same page as 4D on this one, but here it is...

Flow: Tie
Structure: DRM
Punches: DRM
Multis: DRM, better ones overall
Rhymes: Tie
Vocab: Tie, both were simple
Complexity: Tie, again both were simple
Nameplay: Bar
Other: DRM

so..8-5 to Doe Rae Me

[4D]

2-0 to Doe Rae ME, good battle guys, c'mon people more votesw in here!!

[C-Game]

FLOW - Nothin to differ on each sides...
STRUCTURE - DRM...
PUNCHES - Each had some decent ones.. nothin to seperated dem .. so tie...
MULTIES - DRM
RHYMES - Bar just slightly edged it
VOCAB - None had any complex words
COMPLEXITY - DRM.. liked his inbuilt multies and da transition of it
NAMEPLAY - Bar
OTHER - DRM... AT bar.. man it seems like u didnt even tryed.. i hv seen sick stuff from u but this was not good by urs man.....

DRM edged it...

[Doe Ray Me]

woah im surprised, a KO, nice

good battle mate, hopefully have another one soon

[shady4life!]

If ye want votes I would suggest doing others the same favour, this place would be sweet if everybody who dropped in a battle, dropped a vote in an other. I'll drop a vote if I see ye voting in others.

*cough* *cough* i think my battle cud use some votes plzzz