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meinem v's bodaciousent

Postby meinem » Nov 9th, '07, 22:41

right im outa practise but i called this battle so here goes

12 lines im goin first so heres my effort :


from the day i was born i should of known i'd bring disaster
as the day that i appeared was like a nuclear reactor
a ticking time bomb just waitin to explode
all that was needed was the comnbination code
but the code was found easily staring me in the face
it was there in your eyes its time to put u in ur place

i called you out sucker i gonna tear you apart
rip ya fucking eyeballs out and this is just the start
twisted sick and evil is just a few of the words id use
to describe what u do with your verbal mental abuse
u may think ur number 1 and u put others to shame
so give up go home leave before i drive you insane


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Re: meinem v's bodaciousent

Postby bodaciousent » Nov 10th, '07, 00:40

Ok lol here's mine

You obviously think your tuff
tell your friends to wish you luck
cause you stepping to a dame
that's insane to battle me
you better use your brain
im in my prime I do all the crimes
take out anyone in all my rhymes
I make it look easy im breezy
got beef with me you better take it easy
when I spit I spit fast
battle me your rhymes won't last
you don't scare me ill take you out
beef with me? bitch you got no idea what im about

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Re: meinem v's bodaciousent

Postby Doe Ray Me » Nov 10th, '07, 01:14

FLOW = bodaciousent
VOCAB = meinem
STRUCTURE = meinem
MULTI'S = meinem
RHYMES = meinem
OTHER = i enjoyed meinem's more really

meinem got my vote

to bodaciousent: try to increase your vocab and get sum good multi's in there aswell, your flow was good tho
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Re: meinem v's bodaciousent

Postby bodaciousent » Nov 10th, '07, 04:22

I don't use BIG words cuz really there are some people out there that can't understand what it means. Em doesn't even use alot of big words when he freestyles so I did try to use some vocab like Dame instead of chick or lady..But thanks.
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Re: meinem v's bodaciousent

Postby Tash8 » Nov 10th, '07, 05:09

vocab doesn't mean BIG words...

it means more detailed words

in rap you usually try to set a scene in someones mind, u dont do that at all..

plus your rhymes are simple and easy, and ur trying to impress a crowd with that? please... start taking people advice.
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Re: meinem v's bodaciousent

Postby bodaciousent » Nov 10th, '07, 05:17

Tash8 wrote:vocab doesn't mean BIG words...

it means more detailed words

in rap you usually try to set a scene in someones mind, u dont do that at all..

plus your rhymes are simple and easy, and ur trying to impress a crowd with that? please... start taking people advice.



I don't know what your talking about but thanks lol
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Re: meinem v's bodaciousent

Postby bodaciousent » Nov 10th, '07, 05:24

Not that im copying off of em in anyway but since he is the top freestyler out there I have never seen him freestyle like that ever lol. Maybe some times but not really. Just vote if I want feedback ill call someone and ask.
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Re: meinem v's bodaciousent

Postby Doe Ray Me » Nov 10th, '07, 05:27

Actually wasn't Jin the best freestyler/battler and his vocab was quite impressive, if i remember correctly
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Re: meinem v's bodaciousent

Postby bodaciousent » Nov 10th, '07, 05:31

How is he the worst freestyler? he won second in the rap olympics? You obviously know nothing about freestyling so w/e. I actually won 1st place in 2 poetry contest on poetry.com and rap is poetry. Em is one of the greatest freestylers of all time not alot of people can freestyle off the top of there head about anything.

This is a voting battle so why is everyone fighting? lmao
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Re: meinem v's bodaciousent

Postby bodaciousent » Nov 10th, '07, 05:34

Why you know him? LOL w/e man..just leave so ppl can vote.
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Re: meinem v's bodaciousent

Postby Tash8 » Nov 10th, '07, 05:39

wow ur fucking retarded, u don't even know hip hop at all

Eminem, said it himself, he prewrites his freestyle... his freestyles are just freestyle flow and shit his lyrics are in his head.. which is fine cuz that's what 90% of artists do..

can he freestyle? yes he probably can but he's no where close to best..
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Re: meinem v's bodaciousent

Postby bodaciousent » Nov 10th, '07, 05:45

McMaybe wrote:Bitch seems to think she on her way to the red carpet, i honestly did not want to comment on how terrible her music is, but i ahve to now.

You are by far the worst most pathetic rapper i have ever heard, the only way can call yourself the female eminem is if you get a sex change (not thats its really needed, check shady shots) and some acctual talent, you know what that is dont you.. oh wait, obviously not.



You don't bother me and now your deleting my post..because you know the truth of all the shit you said to me in pm on how em isnt that good and how your better and this and that? idc what you say you'll see thats all I got to say..IM DONE.. :whistle:
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Re: meinem v's bodaciousent

Postby Doe Ray Me » Nov 10th, '07, 05:47

McMaybe wrote:Bitch seems to think she on her way to the red carpet, i honestly did not want to comment on how terrible her music is, but i ahve to now.

You are by far the worst most pathetic rapper i have ever heard, the only way can call yourself the female eminem is if you get a sex change (not thats its really needed, check shady shots) and some acctual talent, you know what that is dont you.. oh wait, obviously not.


oh she got pwnd haha

but thats all true, im sorry to say
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Re: meinem v's bodaciousent

Postby bodaciousent » Nov 10th, '07, 05:47

Doe Ray Me wrote:
McMaybe wrote:Bitch seems to think she on her way to the red carpet, i honestly did not want to comment on how terrible her music is, but i ahve to now.

You are by far the worst most pathetic rapper i have ever heard, the only way can call yourself the female eminem is if you get a sex change (not thats its really needed, check shady shots) and some acctual talent, you know what that is dont you.. oh wait, obviously not.


oh she got pwnd haha

but thats all true, im sorry to say



w/e LMAO.
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Re: meinem v's bodaciousent

Postby meinem » Nov 10th, '07, 09:21

c'mon you guys n gals this is supposed to be fun and there have been 20 replies on here but only 1 of them was a vote

so can we get some votes posted plz and take this fight to another new post?

so this is a bit of fun only so get voting plz

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