DFG Vrs Picture Me Rollin [DFG WON]

[dfg]

*8 Lines Each
*Picture Me Rollin 1st
*DFG 2nd
*5 Votes Or 1 KO Wins
*Tie Equals 1 Vote Each

[picture me rollin]

naw i aint famous but only da best killerz move in silence/after people heard of ur death they gonna b in the streetz sayin please stop da violence/n if we foughtid b scar'd but you'd b dead/from multiple uppercutz 2 ur head/watch as ur fam wears ur face on their shirtz/2 know that ur gone 4ever ur mama cryz cuz deep inside it hurtz/2 see her only baby laid up into da hurst/she lookz into da sky sayin why lord why have i been cursed.

[dfg]

There's gonna be no violence coz I'm gonna end this quick/
I burn bigger people like a candle wick/
So when you mess with me you best bring your boiz/
I'm gonna tear your whole soul of your memories and joys/
I'm gonna massacre you internaly and work my way out/
Then dispose of your body, Your sleeping with trout/
I wish I could say I'll miss ya but really I won't/
I wish I could say I regret it but really I don't/

[The Toy Soldier]

Flow:DFG
Wordplay:Tie
Punches:PMR
Rhymes:Tie
Multies:N/A
Other:N/A

Tie.

but im gonna have to say personally id go with PMR for this one.

[MoBrat]

Flow -- DFG
Structure -- DFG
Wordplay -- close but DFG
Punches -- umm again close but DFG
Rhymes -- wow i cant believe im sayin this but again close PMR
Multies -- DFG
Other(enjoyment, creativity, etc..) -- DFG

OVERALL -- 6-1 DFG

PMR structure ur lines better eg.
naw i aint famous but only da best killerz move in silence/
after people heard of ur death they gonna b in the streetz sayin please stop da violence/
n if we foughtid b scar'd but you'd b dead/from multiple uppercutz 2 ur head

dont make it all one line makes it harder for ppl to read try breakin it up so u have a end rhyme each time and try to make the the same length so the lines flow better

eg.
u done, i shot u in the head
u run, cause u know ur dead

^^the same length lines make the flow better and easy to read but make it a little longer then that it was just a quick example

[picture me rollin]

thanx 4 da feed back yall now i know wat i got 2 work on.

[C-Game]

ill copy da cats from mobrat


Flow -- D
Structure -- D... PMR u need to work on ur structure man... some lines were way too long.. ruined da flow too...
Wordplay -- a tie here..
Punches -- gotta go wit PMR
Rhymes -- PMR...
Multies -- not a single prominent multy.. i wont give da multi cat to DFG because of da last 2 lines.. bt i give it to "bring ur boiz" "memories and joys" so u edge it...

Other(enjoyment, creativity, etc..) -- tie here... coz dfg had good metas and pmrs mom line was funny .. good game guys.. PMR u had da game if u worked on ur lines better..and DFG and PMR keep it up.. lookin forward from both of ya.. need help just ask...

game - dfg...

[ravvit]

Flow -- DFG
Structure -- DFG
Wordplay -- DFG
Punches -- DFG
Rhymes -- Really close here boys, But PMR
Multies -- DFG
Other(enjoyment, creativity, etc..) -- DFG

OVERALL -- 6-1 DFG