Purple23Haze vs little ass kid shady forums

[Purple23Haze]

Solace says no one liked him in the first place

I say
You're right man I'm just gonna bounce for a while
go to jail get out with a file hold your file that'll say snitch
cause yous a bitch I twist up piss in and spit out which of
all the shit you spit, done! I drop like it was aquitted hun
little girls shouldn't play with big boy dick cause big boys
give pearl neckless's with awn you'll get it some day
little boy gay a trip away from hells gates
GOD don't like queers son a birdie whispered in my ear u is one
Fuck you up like The USA did Islam and it's islams

[Solace]

lol no one likes a sore loser

No one liked him in the first place.

We were both talking to you I never said no one liked him in the first place.

[brutus09shady]

Solace says no one lied him in the first place

I say
You're right man I'm just gonna bounce for a while
go to jail get out with a file hold your file that'll say snitch
cause yous a bitch I twist up piss in and spit out which of
all the shit you spit, done! I drop like it was aquitted hun
little girls shouldn't play with big boy dick cause big boys
give pearl neckless's with awn you'll get it some day
little boy gay a trip away from hells gates
GOD don't like queers son a birdie whispered in my ear u is one
Fuck you up like The USA did Islam and it's islams

you spit out piss
quit suckin that dick lil miss
and you right you shouldnt play wit this big boy dick
so lemme rip it real quick
ya name is haze
but you straightedge so we know u dont blaze
i am a trip away from hells gate
but i got you fuckin insane goin an i-rrate
like damn i cant belive a teen just shitted
bra to this rap game i am completely committed
go ahead an try to make a comeback
cause we all know that you aint got no solid attack

[Solace]

Haha 2nd time Brutus ever wrote and he gets my vote. PurpleHaze had no structure therefore no flow. And most of your shit didnt make sense Haze. Youll twist up piss? And then spit out the stuff that he spits? Yet Brutus was fine though very simple it's his 1st day ever writing where as for Purple Haze it's his 11th year...

[brutus09shady]

lol thanks

and i aint even worried bout a name yadaamean? im just tryin to get my style write now

[Solace]

lol thanks

and i aint even worried bout a name yadaamean? im just tryin to get my style write now

Alrighty

[James R.]

Brutus was extremely simple but it had a flow and even more it made a bit of sense. Purple you had no structure or flow and you didn't make sense half the time. This battle was whack as hell, but Brutus doesn't write and Purple you just suck. Brutus gets the vote because his piece actually made sense.

[brutus09shady]

i gotta start off some how so why not start off simple and work my way up lol

[Solace]

Haha its funny how Purple acts so hard and gets his ass lyrically beaten by a person whos never written before

[brutus09shady]

oh and dumb fuck we didnt fuck up islam u dumb mother fucker its a religon before you write make sure you know what the shit means

[Solace]

Fuck you up like The USA did Islam and it's islams

lmfao thats like saying I bombed China and the Chinese people too.

[MoBrat]

help for both of u use more complex words use multies and SPACE UR LINES OUT eg 4 spacing

You're right man I'm just gonna bounce for a while
go to jail get out with a file hold your file that'll say snitch

cause yous a bitch I twist up piss in and spit out which of
all the shit you spit, done! I drop like it was aquitted hun

little girls shouldn't play with big boy dick cause big boys
give pearl neckless's with awn you'll get it some day

little boy gay a trip away from hells gates
GOD don't like queers son a birdie whispered in my ear u is one

Fuck you up like The USA did Islam and it's islams

eg 4 multies
little girls shouldn't play, with a big boy dick cause we big boys
he homo n he couldn't say, he playin with his dildos its his toys

not the best but a quick 1

and try 2 make ur lines even like above it will get u both more votes
no call out was made 4 this battle y? its bs so i no vote but give advice

[brutus09shady]

help for both of u use more complex words use multies and SPACE UR LINES OUT eg 4 spacing

You're right man I'm just gonna bounce for a while
go to jail get out with a file hold your file that'll say snitch

cause yous a bitch I twist up piss in and spit out which of
all the shit you spit, done! I drop like it was aquitted hun

little girls shouldn't play with big boy dick cause big boys
give pearl neckless's with awn you'll get it some day

little boy gay a trip away from hells gates
GOD don't like queers son a birdie whispered in my ear u is one

Fuck you up like The USA did Islam and it's islams

eg 4 multies
little girls shouldn't play, with a big boy dick cause we big boys
he homo n he couldn't say, he playin with his dildos its his toys

not the best but a quick 1

and try 2 make ur lines even like above it will get u both more votes

thanks dude