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Coleon vs Scott (Scott M wins 5-2)

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Re: Coleon vs Scott

Postby mcZu » Nov 14th, '09, 02:05

Flow: Scott
Personals: Scott
Punchlines: Cole
Wordplay: Cole
Nameplay: Scott
Complexity: Cole
Rhymes: Scott
Multies:Cole
Other: Cole's was a tad better, 'cause he had more time, lmfao.

So Cole takes this one. If Scott hadn't rushed it, he would have won.
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Re: Coleon vs Scott

Postby Relapse.LP » Nov 14th, '09, 02:09

Flow - Coleon

Scott, you need to extend your lines a bit to give them better flow.

Structure - Coleon

See above.

Punches - Coleon

The JFK line was pretty dope and was my favorite punch of both pieces so that takes it.

Personals - Scott

To be honest, I don't think Coleon had any, while Scott had one.

Multies - Tie

Both of you need more multies. Perhaps Coleon slightly got a little more, there wasn't that many.

Vocabulary - Coleon

My biggest complaint with Scott's rhymes are they sound too much like conversation.

Complexity - Coleon

Second bar was complex and it took me several reads to understand it, in fact.

Nameplay - Scott

I actually liked your first line to start our your verse. Coleon had one too, but not as strong.

Other - Coleon

Just more fun with the punchlines, in general.

Almost flawless sweep for Coleon. Scott's verse seems a little bit rushed and simple. I've seen better from you! But not bad for 15 mn, I guess. :y:

Coleon winning 2-0.
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Re: Coleon vs Scott (Voting Open)

Postby Le Tunisien » Nov 14th, '09, 02:44

Flow: Scott
Personals: Scott
Punchlines: Cole
Wordplay: Cole
Nameplay: Scott
Complexity: Cole
Rhymes: Scott
Multies:Cole
Other: Scott was more entertaining

my vote fo scott :y:

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Re: Coleon vs Scott (Voting Open)

Postby Relapse.LP » Nov 14th, '09, 03:34

Fail battle, no offense. What are you guys even beefing about? :confusion:
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The whole and not the half of it; vocab and not the math of it/
Projectile that them blasted with; accurate assassin shit/
Me and Kweli close like... Bethlehem and Nazareth/


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Re: Coleon vs Scott (Voting Open)

Postby Spyder » Nov 14th, '09, 03:43

to be honest man, i didnt like either of em. i thought that was a huge lack of personals and nothing that made me say DAMN... not even........darn.......... namean?
idk what people doin battling latley but fuck lets step it up

Flow - Coleon
Personals - Scotty
Wordplay - NONE
Punches - Scotty
Rhymes - Scotty
Structure - TIE
Vocab - NONE
Complexity - NONE
Multies - Scotty
Other - Coleon
so thats like 5-3 Scotty :b:
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Re: Coleon vs Scott (Voting Open)

Postby Spyder » Nov 14th, '09, 03:47

all im seeing is Col's line saying your gay= flame
but i consider that a punch more so that WP
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Re: Coleon vs Scott (Voting Open)

Postby Spyder » Nov 14th, '09, 03:51

Coleon wrote:thank you Spy :worship:

and yeah idk if you can leave stuff blank that is blatantly unequivocally there lol

hmmm :unsure:
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Re: Coleon vs Scott (Voting Open)

Postby Le Tunisien » Nov 14th, '09, 12:31

krayzy wrote:FLOW : Scotty, both was good but i could just flow Scottys better
STRUCTURE: Coleon
PUNCHES: Coleon, liked the M-A-C line
MULTIES: Coleon
RHYMES: Scotty
VOCAB: Scotty, just thought he used his vocab better
COMPLEXITY: Scotty
NAMEPLAY: Scotty, both had a lil nameplay, but i liked how Scotty used it better


Both were decent, not too good, not real bad, nothing special tho really, i just seemed to like Scotts style better, was close though, took a decent amount of time to vote, some catagorys i was thinking of Coleon but i just seemed to like Scottys more in some areas

So yea Scotty gets my vote

Pretty close battle tho :happy:

that is exactly what i thought :y:

and coleon dude.......relax ....chill
why was i supposed to vote for you??? i just voted to the verse i liked better,i voted for scott even if he been not cool with me these days...harsh comments ... and stuffs..........so...dont cry :flower:

and yeah ,thats my opinion as a voter and i like scotts verse better :y:

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Re: Coleon vs Scott (Voting Open)

Postby Steve Spag » Nov 14th, '09, 19:35

No hate Coleon but my vote goes to Scotty. His flowed better overall in my opinion and although you did have some nice punches, he did aswell and it was nice on the ears (in my head when i was reading it).

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Re: Coleon vs Scott

Postby Xray » Nov 14th, '09, 20:00

Scott M wrote:i'm flowing like 'beyonce'

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OMFG that's self knock out right there. Battle should have never begun, soon as you said that, it was KO, I mean holy fucking shit man, this dude flows like Beyonce, the legendary hip hop rapper Beyonce OMFG! BE SCARED. :o You serious? Hahahaahahaha that was epic. :laughing:

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Re: Coleon vs Scott

Postby Xray » Nov 14th, '09, 20:06

Scott M wrote:
Xray wrote:
Scott M wrote:i'm flowing like 'beyonce'

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OMFG that's self knock out right there. Battle should have never begun, soon as you said that, it was KO, I mean holy fucking shit man, this dude flows like Beyonce, the legendary hip hop rapper Beyonce OMFG! BE SCARED. :o You serious? Hahahaahahaha that was epic. :laughing:

Made my morning. :smoking:


if you carried on reading after that line, it becomes obvious that i was talking about her dance moves. and used it as a simile.

You brought dance moves to a text battle? Lmfao. Sorry buddy by last I checked this wasn't "So you think you can dance", its a fucking text battle, and which dumb ass says some soft shit like that and uses it as a simile just to get votes lol. People who voted for you, don't realize how homo your piece was.
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Re: Coleon vs Scott (Voting Open)

Postby Xray » Nov 14th, '09, 20:10

:laughing: *is still lol'ing at "I'm flowing like Beyonce"
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Re: Coleon vs Scott

Postby classthe_king » Nov 14th, '09, 20:17

Flow: Scott
Personals: Scott
Punchlines: Cole
Wordplay: Cole
Nameplay: Scott
Complexity: Cole
Rhymes: Scott
Multies:Cole
Other: Scotty, his first bar was nice, and coleon that superbad line was kinda corny, already used by kanye smh

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Re: Coleon vs Scott (Voting Open)

Postby Xray » Nov 14th, '09, 20:20

That's cause you flowed like Beyonce :laughing:
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