Nimbus vs Gutawafang (Gutawafang wins)

[gutawafang]

8 lines
no flip/plagiarism
3hit ko. First to 5 win

It don't matter who goes first. Just post when you ready. I'll post in about 1 or 2 hours. or maybe less than 1 hour.

[gutawafang]

Nimbus, just a broomstick with my knee I break it
Like some bones, she can't fucking possibly fake it
That she's winning this, there's fucking sin in this
Cuz I'll be in the sexual position if I "sit" on this
No doubt, a slaughter with this minute's work
Filled with laughter cuz he "sweeps" his own dirt
Let him sleep on his own rhymes, talk about randomness
Free prostitution, but still without no customers

[Nimbus_9]

I'm a guy, sorry i got off before dropping last night

Every stanza when rhymin another panzie gets blighted
I rip this, so you despising where the bandage applyin

ranting the lightning, gun play, i'll let this weak shit slide
put the AR in Y'EAR and call it a three six five

heat twists spines, reload, cap em, squeeze at his face an
best believe I Gund'em like Japanese Animation

seize admiration, bust loud, put ya face on the speaker
how this little Gutter gonna take on a Katrina

[gutawafang]

Alright guys. Time to vote.

[Nimbus_9]

please vote

[Elision]

I'd say you guys were about even, but I have to give this one to nimmie ^_^

[Wic Kid]

I'd say you guys were about even, but I have to give this one to nimmie ^_^

I dont think this counts, you cant just vote like this. Break your vote to categories.

On topic:

Multies: Nimbus
Personals: Guta
Punches: Guta
Vocab: Nimbus
Flow: Guta
Wordplay: Guta
Nameplay: neither
Complexity: Nimbus

I vote Guta.

[gutawafang]

I'd say you guys were about even, but I have to give this one to nimmie ^_^

I dont think this counts, you cant just vote like this. Break your vote to categories.

On topic:

Multies: Nimbus
Personals: Guta
Punches: Guta
Vocab: Nimbus
Flow: Guta
Wordplay: Guta
Nameplay: neither
Complexity: Nimbus

I vote Guta.

Thanks. 1-1.

[Nimbus_9]

I'd say you guys were about even, but I have to give this one to nimmie ^_^

I dont think this counts, you cant just vote like this. Break your vote to categories.

On topic:

Multies: Nimbus
Personals: Guta
Punches: Guta
Vocab: Nimbus
Flow: Guta
Wordplay: Guta
Nameplay: neither
Complexity: Nimbus

I vote Guta.

show his personal? punches is disputable so I'll give you that, show me his wordplay (Gund'em is technically wordplay)

not to be a dick but if you don't know rap mechanics don't vote (and no i'm not a "vote" snathcer whiny bitch, this is common sense)

[Wic Kid]

^Fuck you, man. Your piece was so general that you could have used it against anyone. Only line that was actually attackin Guta was the last one. About the wordplay, you can have 10 times more of those than Guta, but if I liked them more than yours... I will vote for those. What, you think I voted for Guta cuz he's gonna send me a Christmas present or sumthin? I dont care who wins here. So shut tha fuck up and take it like a man.

[Nimbus_9]

^Fuck you, man. Your piece was so general that you could have used it against anyone. Only line that was actually attackin Guta was the last one. About the wordplay, you can have 10 times more of those than Guta, but if I liked them more than yours... I will vote for those. What, you think I voted for Guta cuz he's gonna send me a Christmas present or sumthin? I dont care who wins here. So shut tha fuck up and take it like a man.

it's not being a dick, it's being honest

if he didn't have wordplay it obviously can't go his way, and neither of us even had a personal

your incompetent and your childish rage shows your ignorance, calm down

[Wic Kid]

Huh, its pretty amazing how people think they can detect RAGE on internet...smh

[Nimbus_9]

Huh, its pretty amazing how people think they can detect RAGE on internet...smh

so your use of the word fuck does not conotate rage? The paragraph long reply to an honest statement bashing me in a childish way doesn't resemble a hint of anger?

[Wic Kid]

Huh, its pretty amazing how people think they can detect RAGE on internet...smh

so your use of the word fuck does not conotate rage? The paragraph long reply to an honest statement bashing me in a childish way doesn't resemble a hint of anger?

I dont get mad over the internet. Especially at someone I have never met. This is writing. When Im mad at someone, I usually wanna hit them or sumthin. And thats not the case here.

Look, just get over this. To be honest, as a non-battle verse, yours was much better. But this is a rap battle, and I looked at it that way. Thats it, no hard feelings.

[Nimbus_9]

Huh, its pretty amazing how people think they can detect RAGE on internet...smh

so your use of the word fuck does not conotate rage? The paragraph long reply to an honest statement bashing me in a childish way doesn't resemble a hint of anger?

I dont get mad over the internet. Especially at someone I have never met. This is writing. When Im mad at someone, I usually wanna hit them or sumthin. And thats not the case here.

Look, just get over this. To be honest, as a non-battle verse, yours was much better. But this is a rap battle, and I looked at it that way. Thats it, no hard feelings.

I will not let go of the most flawed vote I've ever seen. To be honest it makes your intelligence on the subject look questionable.

There were no personals. You said his (non existent) personals were better.

You said his (again nonexistent) wordplay was better.

Fighting over battles is dumb, I agree. But voting on battles when you obviously had know idea is even worse. I'm sorry you can't do things right I truly am.