Smithy vs. Bullet_Boy46 (VOTE NOW!)

[bullet_boy46]

dropping quick

[bullet_boy46]

im the elite force like marine raiders and navy seals
i kick it operatic til that fat lady squeals
your lyrics are stuffing so now I know how gravy feels
you should just shutup, thinking your such a G
while man, your still learning your ABCs, 123s
your still learning from the greatest
like the marine motto says, mess with the best
die like the rest

thats all i ahd, im saving my stuff for next year i know i probably lost, but hell, i dont really care
new year means new record for me but the loss goes on my official record

[Element.]

Hitting the bullet into Bullet Boy/
put down the microphone, it isnt a toy/
the battle wont have no ending of joy/
go back to writing a new, nersery rhyme/
theres no time, for you to shine, in your lifetime/
theres only onetime, which is your bedtime/
you aint bad enough to commit a crime, for a dime/
you just cant spit a line, you only just mime/

vote and brake down.

[Element.]

Can someone atleast vote and brake it down .... Instead of just reading and then going.

[bullet_boy46]

Can someone atleast vote and brake it down .... Instead of just reading and then going.

its so lonely

[Element.]

hmmm

[bullet_boy46]

hmmm

patiently waiting

[Spyder]

going with bullet

both of you had VERY basic rhyming in there and not that great of multies
tho bullet had a few, no nameplay tho smitty mentioned his name once, didnt play off it
no wordplay. not really any punches and deffintly no personals

heres a tip to both of you, go to eachother's profile use their
location, age, occupation, interests, name, past posts, avatar, sig
status, alllllll against them in a battle

and make sure your rhyme in "couplets" you both rhymed in odd number of lines

[Element.]

going with bullet

both of you had VERY basic rhyming in there and not that great of multies
tho bullet had a few, no nameplay tho smitty mentioned his name once, didnt play off it
no wordplay. not really any punches and deffintly no personals

heres a tip to both of you, go to eachother's profile use their
location, age, occupation, interests, name, past posts, avatar, sig
status, alllllll against them in a battle

and make sure your rhyme in "couplets" you both rhymed in odd number of lines

i hit him more then he hit me, he had nothing to do with me ;S

[SajN]

FLOW - tie
STRUCTURE - tie
PUNCHES - tie
MULTIES - bullet ... At least he had few, Smithy had none
RHYMES - bullet ... Smithy, you had "time" three times... Come on.,
VOCAB - none
COMPLEXITY - none
NAMEPLAY - None
OTHER( enjoyment ,metaphores , creativity anythin u can think off) - none


Bullet wins.

Very weak and wack battle.

[bullet_boy46]

FLOW - tie
STRUCTURE - tie
PUNCHES - tie
MULTIES - bullet ... At least he had few, Smithy had none
RHYMES - bullet ... Smithy, you had "time" three times... Come on.,
VOCAB - none
COMPLEXITY - none
NAMEPLAY - None
OTHER( enjoyment ,metaphores , creativity anythin u can think off) - none


Bullet wins.

Very weak and wack battle.

ill take anything

[Element.]

FLOW - tie
STRUCTURE - tie
PUNCHES - tie
MULTIES - bullet ... At least he had few, Smithy had none
RHYMES - bullet ... Smithy, you had "time" three times... Come on.,
VOCAB - none
COMPLEXITY - none
NAMEPLAY - None
OTHER( enjoyment ,metaphores , creativity anythin u can think off) - none


Bullet wins.

Very weak and wack battle.

swear mine had more rhymes :S

[mcZu]

I'ma give it a tie... In my opinion none of the verses were good enough to even break down.

[SajN]

theres no time, for you to shine, in your lifetime/
theres only onetime, which is your bedtime/

seriously??

Oh, I said three. I just noticed its 4.
You had the rhymes I used to do when i was 10 years old man..

[Element.]

dang