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Re: Coleon vs Smithy

Postby Arrinef » Jan 5th, '10, 03:51

dope coleon :y:


where you at smithy
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Re: Coleon vs Smithy

Postby Spyder » Jan 5th, '10, 20:08

good verse Col, let me give you some constructive criticism

increase your vocab a bit, obv with this new system its only worth one point
and chances are against smithy it wont be need. but makes multes better and possibly rhymes as well :y:

3 bar talks about his girl, there was some funny word play with Tiger, but talkin about sumone's girl isnt really a personal nor a good punck imo(sense we dont know his girl)

good verse, just tryin to make you better :y:
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Re: Coleon vs Smithy

Postby mcZu » Jan 5th, '10, 20:10

Lmfao, that's some real dirt you got there. Ghost writing. :zipped:
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Re: Coleon vs Smithy

Postby Spyder » Jan 5th, '10, 20:38

word to that :p
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Re: Coleon vs Smithy

Postby Relapse.LP » Jan 6th, '10, 00:39

The 2 Complex line was dope. :worship:
Yo, from the first to the last of it; delivery is passionate/
The whole and not the half of it; vocab and not the math of it/
Projectile that them blasted with; accurate assassin shit/
Me and Kweli close like... Bethlehem and Nazareth/

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Re: Coleon vs Smithy

Postby Element. » Jan 8th, '10, 03:09

you called me out to battle, thinking i won't defeat you
my lyrical jaws are open and my rhyme's going to eat you

wordplay get's you nowhere when no one understands it
you're a pussy, scared of Scott M, only came back when they banned him

bowl haircut, start running, your fat will burn like coal/cole
look after yourself, then maybe your ex girl might call

3rd line - he made a thread about punchlines/wordplay that you couldn't get to work
4th line - self explanatory
6th line - little birdie told me he has girl problems, lmao.
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Re: Coleon vs Smithy

Postby Element. » Jan 8th, '10, 03:12

Coleon wrote:3 days = 3 bars

everyone votteeee


yh man i didnt even see this up, even when i told you i was not going to battle.
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Re: Coleon vs Smithy (Vote Here)

Postby Relapse.LP » Jan 8th, '10, 03:18

Must I say more? :coffee:
Yo, from the first to the last of it; delivery is passionate/
The whole and not the half of it; vocab and not the math of it/
Projectile that them blasted with; accurate assassin shit/
Me and Kweli close like... Bethlehem and Nazareth/

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Re: Coleon vs Smithy (Vote Here)

Postby Element. » Jan 8th, '10, 03:19

Relapse.LP wrote:Must I say more? :coffee:


Vote? :sweating:
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Re: Coleon vs Smithy (Vote Here)

Postby Spyder » Jan 8th, '10, 03:22

Coleon gets my vote easy

but smithy discovered a multi :o
just make things rhyme more directly
and the punches and dope wordplay will come
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Re: Coleon vs Smithy (Vote Here)

Postby Element. » Jan 8th, '10, 03:23

Spyder wrote:Coleon gets my vote easy

but smithy discovered a multi :o
just make things rhyme more directly
and the punches and dope wordplay will come



Brake the vote down.
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Re: Coleon vs Smithy (Vote Here)

Postby Spyder » Jan 8th, '10, 03:25

:shakehead:

(3)Punches - Cole
(3)Personals - Cole
(2)Multies - Cole
(1)Flow - Cole
(1)Vocab/Complex - Cole
(1)Other - Cole

did u need to see it...
i think thats the new thing :sweating:
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Re: Coleon vs Smithy (Vote Here)

Postby Element. » Jan 8th, '10, 03:27

Spyder wrote::shakehead:

(3)Punches - Cole
(3)Personals - Cole
(2)Multies - Cole
(1)Flow - Cole
(1)Vocab/Complex - Cole
(1)Other - Cole

did u need to see it...
i think thats the new thing :sweating:


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Re: Coleon vs Smithy (Vote Here)

Postby Edge » Jan 8th, '10, 03:45

imma have to go with coleon too
but smithy did a nice job :y: defienntly gettin nicer man
be the best you can be, and if thats not good enough for people... than fuck em
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Re: Coleon vs Smithy (Vote Here)

Postby Element. » Jan 8th, '10, 03:46

Edge wrote:imma have to go with coleon too
but smithy did a nice job :y: defienntly gettin nicer man


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