ARTILLEY vs. Rap soul

[Rap Soul]

THis is in the call ourt section, but movin' it here were it's supposed to be the rules are
10 lines
3rounds
Artilley went first and said this


Ima bout to wrap rap soul around a telephone pole
its your turn to feel the full frontel gharge
some say its like being hit by a barge
i got dudes calling me sarge
my words cut right through theres nuttin u can do
this is only a preview theres no limit to the shit that i spit
its like they just roll off my lips
and take u for a trip to somewhere you'll have to go
u have no choice once u here the choice of the voice i use
ta tell u your toll for comin to my little world
is ur rap soul!!!!!!!!
Remember that was Artillery

[Rap Soul]

I said this

Yo,Yo
You say people call you sarge/
well,people call me captain/
cause I ain't a little pussy bicth who comes out slappin'/
i come out wit a gat'n; just bust through your chest even if you wearin' a vest/
Look Dawg,I can lay an AK to your head and blow it away/
Fuck that, i'll blow you away wit just muh spray/
you can't escape it/
yo just made me create a bomb thats got to go off/
You've come to far to stop, can't beat the clock/
3-2-1, what's that; yeah I think I won/ Boxing

Yo I can't finish this this weekend if I can I'll post back up.And if an't get here ,then either judge this people.Or Post up your round2 verse, and i'll come at you monday or maybe sunday if i'm lucky.
WHo's the Judge?

[Ivy]

Ummmmm, wow. Both ya'll were about average. No offence meant, but you guys really need to work on ya skills, ya know. But you guys had some great lines.

ARTILLEY:
its your turn to feel the full frontel gharge
some say its like being hit by a barge
i got dudes calling me sarge

Rap Soul Reversed that on you with my fav lines from him:
You say people call you sarge/
well,people call me captain/
cause I ain't a little pussy bicth who comes out slappin'/
i come out wit a gat'n; just bust through your chest even if you wearin' a vest/

Overall I'd Have to Vote
Rap Soul


To ARTILLEY - A word of advice, never talk about you rhymin' style or how you spit, that's just ammo for the opponent to throw back in ya face.

[Rap Soul]

I know it was lke my worst work eer, but i wrte that late at night and I was tired i. So when i woke up ilooked at it and just appened to right that captain line in the day time. Then , I put it together and i just put it up i wasn't in the mood to write more so it wasbetter. SO next time I'm writen in the day more.

[Ivy]

I know it was lke my worst work eer, but i wrte that late at night and I was tired i. So when i woke up ilooked at it and just appened to right that captain line in the day time. Then , I put it together and i just put it up i wasn't in the mood to write more so it wasbetter. SO next time I'm writen in the day more.

Probably a good idea, but make sure to keep a pen/pencil/crayon/marker/sharpie/fuck any writing untencil with you at all times, so when something come to your mind, even the slightest of thing you can write it down and revise and edit it later.

[Rap Soul]

I know it was lke my worst work eer, but i wrte that late at night and I was tired i. So when i woke up ilooked at it and just appened to right that captain line in the day time. Then , I put it together and i just put it up i wasn't in the mood to write more so it wasbetter. SO next time I'm writen in the day more.

Probably a good idea, but make sure to keep a pen/pencil/crayon/marker/sharpie/fuck any writing untencil with you at all times, so when something come to your mind, even the slightest of thing you can write it down and revise and edit it later.

i d thts actually how got the line i wrot it dn and edited it in the morinig and good luck wih your battle.twoe

[Ivy]

All I can do is my best, ya know. Anywayz, how many votes do you need to win? You neva specified that. 3, 5, etc.?

[Rap Soul]

??? 3 iguess.

[Ivy]

Well then

1-0 Rap Soul

2 to go


(Clarifies things up abit)

[ARTILLERY]

Well guess what ding ding moyhea fucker round two your thourgh
u betta belive ima stand my ground when u come around with your little ak ima ruin your day
bitch i aint came here to play i came here to stay
ill never fade away i got the artillery to blast back track after track stack bitches like u in the back of the trunk
fuck that ill tie u down in the back of the truck
drive u around town so pepole can see me clown u around
then have u lost never to be found
thats how i get down

ya three votes sounds good . im still new to this but hope to get better..........

[Ivy]

Well guess what ding ding moyhea fucker round two your thourgh
u betta belive ima stand my ground when u come around with your little ak ima ruin your day
bitch i aint came here to play i came here to stay
ill never fade away i got the artillery to blast back track after track stack bitches like u in the back of the trunk
fuck that ill tie u down in the back of the truck
drive u around town so pepole can see me clown u around
then have u lost never to be found
thats how i get down

ya three votes sounds good . im still new to this but hope to get better..........

Read his post, he ain't postin' no more verses.....that's the reason I already voted....

[Rap Soul]

Well guess what ding ding moyhea fucker round two your thourgh
u betta belive ima stand my ground when u come around with your little ak ima ruin your day
bitch i aint came here to play i came here to stay
ill never fade away i got the artillery to blast back track after track stack bitches like u in the back of the trunk
fuck that ill tie u down in the back of the truck
drive u around town so pepole can see me clown u around
then have u lost never to be found
thats how i get down

ya three votes sounds good . im still new to this but hope to get better..........

Read his post, he ain't postin' no more verses.....that's the reason I already voted....

I'll post one more, but i'm not responding today because I just got back from miami.So i'll post tommoroow and that will be my last one. Taylor if you want to revote tommorrow you can. Tired so im a hit it. Peace.

[chronic]

in that case i vote for artillery u got strong rhymes man continue like that

[Rap Soul]

Chronic i'm fine with your vote, but wait till I drop.Then, vote for who won.

[Rap Soul]

In battle 2, i'll rattle you/
pick you up and shatter you/
who said i was through, you, I just begun/
yet I already won/
Bitch, I'd like to see you try to clown me around/
You can even try to put a bullet in my chest/
Fuck! wearin a vest/
it don't matter you'll miss/
cause you aim as good as you diss/
And the real reason I said fuck battelin 3 times/
Is because I just beat you with 21 lines/

Now vote people.