Spyder vs Shadeonback(Spyder Won)

[Spyder]

You fight-at-last but I shine with the brightest-raps
No shade-on-back, take-a-match and light-your-ass.

Stifle-back, I aim-right at your dome with gage-bright
Cant respond phantoms ghost must of got stage-fright.

I change-lives, tryna drop the world but see you rap-soft
I got shit off the top so hard it will blow that hat-off.

Bar 1 – “shade on back”… “light” your ass

Bar 2 – his avi is “phantom of the opera”
So “ghost” writer… and it was a “stage” play

Bar 3 – drop the world is in his sig

[shadeonback]

Spyder you my cat son, as you know they call me the pharaoh,
so if I die in this song you'll be right next to me in my tomb,

My Rhymes hit you leaving a visible scar like Harrys Potter,
transforming your past in a horrible battle in which your lost your father and mother,

Your Head in the air and lost as the ballon boy, im a grown man and i'm doing away you as an old toy,
moment always comes and this be enough for hoy.

[Spyder]

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[Strictt Ame]

You fight-at-last but I shine with the brightest-raps
No shade-on-back, take-a-match and light-your-ass.
^Decent..

Stifle-back, I aim-right at your dome with gage-bright
Cant respond phantoms ghost must of got stage-fright.
^His avi is V for Vendetta so this didnt hit at all..meta was ok though

I change-lives, tryna drop the world but see you rap-soft
I got shit off the top so hard it will blow that hat-off.
^OK closer


Spyder you my cat son, as you know they call me the pharaoh,
so if I die in this song you'll be right next to me in my tomb,
^Pretty weak

My Rhymes hit you leaving a visible scar like Harrys Potter,
transforming your past in a horrible battle in which your lost your father and mother,
^Decent punch attempt

Your Head in the air and lost as the ballon boy, im a grown man and i'm doing away you as an old toy,
moment always comes and this be enough for hoy.
^Umm..no


(3) Punchlines: Spy
(3) Personals: Spy
(2) Multies: Spy
(1) Flow: Spy
(1) Structure: Spy
(1) Vocab/Complex: Shade
(1) Other: Spy

11-1 for Spyder..

Pretty weak battle, Spyder you can do a hell of a lot better than this..weak personals and the avi punch was a miss..Shade, you have some simple disses but nothin related to Spyder at all..and your punches were poorly delivered..work on attacking your oppoent and not just making random disses..

[lazyhazycrazydavey]

(3) Punchlines: Spyder
(3) Personals: Spyder
(2) Multies: Spyder
(1) Flow: Spyder
(1) Structure: Spyder
(1) Vocab/Complex: Shadeonback
(1) Other: none


10-1 Spyder

[Spyder]

usin Cole breakdown huh

but ya i know, he hasnt done shit so no personals
and fuck me on Vendetta


thanks guys 2-0

[Yah-hah]

(3) Punchlines: Spyder
(3) Personals: Spyder
(2) Multies: Spyder
(1) Flow: Spyder
(1) Structure: Spyder
(1) Vocab/Complex: Spyder
(1) Other: none

[Spyder]

thanks Yah

3-0 KO