mceddie vs enimee

[mceddie]

im a pitbull, a bull with a bottom/less pit to/ his heart/
ima give u the horns, /i spit to/ rip apart/
yah, i rhyme like its a /work of art/
your shit stinks, like you just /took a fart/
i /combine/ lines/ to /intertwine/ my devine/ rhyme design/
and /i refine/ and align/ my malign/ till you feel an /incline/ to resign/
/enimee?/ not quite /the mc/ you hoped /to be/
and i can /gaurantee/ we all agree/ to a degree/ that i just went on an /mc killing spree/

[Enimee]

neva dat, simply a slow sho gimme a sec to keystyle this shit

ok i digress, sure took my time respondin but here, lemme try and test
i mean, im baddlin mc-eddie so please just give me my fries and check
cause this gonna be short, no need for a drink and a side of eggs
i got shit to do bro and at times, i been known to rhyme a mess
so i aint gonna bother taking any sort of fuckin time with this
i mean, your structures off balance and your flows borderline at best
me? ima savage, flow stone cold damage, u runnin? punches hit u in the back till your spine is bent
and dog, i respect to attempt, but thats too weak, and i flow hard, like snortin lines of cement

breakdown...
stone cold damage...stone cold, played in movie, called damage,

[gutawafang]

Multis-Enimee
Rhymes- Ed
Punches- Enimee
Wordplay- Enimee

I vote Enimee.

[mceddie]

Good battle

[Enimee]

word up for votes

[Strictt Ame]

No offense Eddie but Enimee pretty much dominated this..


Vote - Enimee

[mceddie]

No offense Eddie but Enimee pretty much dominated this..


Vote - Enimee

none taken, man. a battles a battle. this will just help me learn and better myself

[Strictt Ame]

I feel ya..infact I used to rhyme just like you did hear..not alot of direction but alot of inner rhymes and believe it or not with that many inner rhyme you prolly have several multis and dont even realize it..it all just take time and practice, soon you wont be focused on rhyming you will be focused on metas and things and the rhymes will come effortlessly

[mceddie]

I feel ya..infact I used to rhyme just like you did hear..not alot of direction but alot of inner rhymes and believe it or not with that many inner rhyme you prolly have several multis and dont even realize it..it all just take time and practice, soon you wont be focused on rhyming you will be focused on metas and things and the rhymes will come effortlessly

thanks for the words man, appreciate it.