MC Anoymous vs LilWayne4Life (WWT Match 7)

[Spyder]

MC Anonymous
I'm still the flame in light, with the skills to drain your life
umAD You're like a chinese man, got a lilwayne4life
Your bitchin got ya stitched in posistions to get split wit division
surgical incisions, puncture verses through ya vision, listen
ya writtens wit Wayne's DNA like his dick is your fuckin' pen
I beat em once, now I deal with this fuckin slut again,
He get his ''rocks off'' cause Lil Wayne is his ''Prom Queen''
***** wash your palms clean, Ya icon but to make you bust on ya screen
This bitch-midget thinkin' he ''sick-with-IT''..like the girl from You-Never Know
I'll leave your crew-severed-yo, you like wayne, a blood with blue-letters-though

LilWyane4Life
It's time for the family to "identify" this "anonymous" corpse
the "shady" mother went in"sane" when she saw her daughter dismembered on the front porch
Later she told the detectives she permanently "banned"and kicked anonny out of the house
anon then TRaveled with her fellow prostitutes to a bunny ranch down south
where she met her pimp who was a rapper and went by the MC name "spyder"
she wasn't use to the "beating" so she went after weaker opponents for the one nighters
the cause of death later was labeled under "unknown" even though bulletholes were "proof" shown
the number of holes had the doctors confuse from the amount of dick riding being carried on
life was good until one night her mac caught her ghostwriting and giving head to solace in bed
i guess thats what happens when the "mac" is as bright as my passion for violence and now shes dead



Line 1 & 2: TRshady is the family, sajn is the mom b/c of his random emiontons when he ban ppl
Lines 3 & 4: after getting banned, he goes from one forum to another
Line 6: anon only battles weaker people b/c he knows if he battle real lyricists he will loss
Line 8:Alot people dick ride him and some of the votes are bias

[gutawafang]

just bumping to see how the votes go. nice battle.

[LilWayne4Life]

Spyder can you resize my text to 87? Here's my verse were you can read and understand it better

It's time for the family to "identify" this "anonymous" corpse
the "shady" mother went in"sane" when she saw her daughter dismembered on the front porch
Later she told the detectives she permanently "banned"and kicked anonny out of the house
anon then TRaveled with her fellow prostitutes to a bunny ranch down south
where she met her pimp who was a rapper and went by the MC name "spyder"
she wasn't use to the "beating" so she went after weaker opponents for the one nighters
the cause of death later was labeled under "unknown" even though bulletholes were "proof" shown
the number of holes had the doctors confuse from the amount of dick riding being carried on
life was good until one night her mac caught her ghostwriting and giving head to solace in bed
i guess thats what happens when the "mac" is as bright as my passion for violence and now shes dead



Line 1 & 2: TRshady is the family, sajn is the mom b/c of his random emiontons when he ban ppl
Lines 3 & 4: after getting banned, he goes from one forum to another
Line 6: anon only battles weaker people b/c he knows if he battle real lyricists he will loss
Line 8:Alot people dick ride him and some of the votes are bias

[Solace]

Am I allowed to vote or are their judges? If so, I vote MC Anon.

@LilWayne4Life, you know we're cool so don't say anything like I'm hopping on anons dick...Honestly a lot of members on this site cant handle that they arent good enough so they say "oh hes more popular therefore its dickridden votes and not actually his skills" :\ Could you please show me any unfair votes of mine? Cause you say Im a dickrider in this so please do prove it.

MC Anonymous had: Flow, Internal rhymes, nameplay, wordplay, personals, punchlines, multies, structure
LilWayne4Life had: Bad structure>Which leads to bad flow, 2 syllable multis AT MOST, no punchlines, bad nameplay I guess (first line), only internal in this was last line....mac is as bright as my passion for violence (I count it as an internal multi at least, dunno if you do)...The entire thing wasnt good.

I know you probably dont believe that you actually arent good at writing 'cause you're the almighty and I cant prove you wrong unless cause its "dickriding" to you...But whatev

[Emadyville]

Punches(3) Anon
Personals(3) Anon
Multies(2) Anon
Flow(2) Anon by a mile
Vocab/Complex(1) Anon
Other(1) Anon for that chinese line

Anon you killed it, lilwayne4life I thought it was cool you tried to write like a little story with your shit but the flow/long bars made your attempt fall short. Good effort tho, you battled a beast but your effort was def solid. Great verse anon

[LilWayne4Life]

I know you probably dont believe that you actually arent good at writing 'cause you're the almighty and I cant prove you wrong unless cause its "dickriding" to you...But whatev

Well you wouldn't really know how i write until i post my writing material so i dunno how can you judge based on my battles where 85% of it is freestyle with a little rearranging. And i thought the structure in the STORY was good, but again that's my opinion.

[Emadyville]

I know you probably dont believe that you actually arent good at writing 'cause you're the almighty and I cant prove you wrong unless cause its "dickriding" to you...But whatev

Well you wouldn't really know how i write until i post my writing material so i dunno how can you judge based on my battles where 85% of it is freestyle with a little rearranging. And i thought the structure in the STORY was good, but again that's my opinion.

The long bars made it tough cause trying to get to the end rhymes, you have to go back and re-read it get the rhymes, fix that and it'd of been a lot better. Your thought process and content ideas were strong, it just didn't translate well in the verse. I hope that helped

[Solace]

I know you probably dont believe that you actually arent good at writing 'cause you're the almighty and I cant prove you wrong unless cause its "dickriding" to you...But whatev

Well you wouldn't really know how i write until i post my writing material so i dunno how can you judge based on my battles where 85% of it is freestyle with a little rearranging. And i thought the structure in the STORY was good, but again that's my opinion.

But we're supposed to judge based on your battles, this is the rap battles section not Cw...You dont even post in Cw tho lol. I think Emady hit the nail on this, got what I was trying to say about structure.

[classthe_king]

Punches(3) Anon
Personals(3) Anon
Multies(2) Anon
Flow(2) Anon by a mile
Vocab/Complex(1) Anon
Other(1) Anon for that chinese line

Anon you killed it, lilwayne4life I thought it was cool you tried to write like a little story with your shit but the flow/long bars made your attempt fall short. Good effort tho, you battled a beast but your effort was def solid. Great verse anon

That

[Drama Setter]

MC Anon killed it

[Almostlity]

Bitch, you get no love.

[BILI]

2 votes are already in,so I dont need to vore right?

[LilWayne4Life]

I know you probably dont believe that you actually arent good at writing 'cause you're the almighty and I cant prove you wrong unless cause its "dickriding" to you...But whatev

Well you wouldn't really know how i write until i post my writing material so i dunno how can you judge based on my battles where 85% of it is freestyle with a little rearranging. And i thought the structure in the STORY was good, but again that's my opinion.

But we're supposed to judge based on your battles, this is the rap battles section not Cw...You dont even post in Cw tho lol. I think Emady hit the nail on this, got what I was trying to say about structure.

What are you talking about? I said how can you judge and say i do not know how to "write" when most of my battles are freestyles. Wtf are you getting this should be judge based on CW?

Bitch, you get no love.

Line 8:Alot people dick ride him and some of the votes are bias

[DƎRDYPK]

MC Anonabis took this one home

[Colossus]

MC Anonymous = Anonymous1 ?

In any case he's the best battler I've seen here. Easily won this.