Cosh vs. Murph (VOTE)

[WakeUpShow]

You say talk is cheap, but a fights expensive.
When I'm done your plastic surgeon will be struggling to pay his expenses.

Your broke ass is on the street juggling just to pay for your fence, bitch.
I'm talking to my mob, like what the hell is the next step...lynch?

I walked into this battle saying, "Murph? this will be a cinch!"
Just call me the Phillies, from the way that i just clinched.

I'm runnin circles around you, just to see a fuckin' square wince,
The bitches say I'm Invincible, that's why the call me vince.


line 6- it's looking like the Phils are gonna clinch the wildcard.
line 8- Invincible is the movie about Vince Papale, the walk on football player for the eagles back in the 70's or 80's

[murphmanny]

pretty good (Y)

you called out openly, that's your first mistake
eight line battle, with rhymes worst than drake

you're gonna nurse and bake, burst and ache
curse and shake, begging to be submersed in a lake

you're as ill as a kid staying home from school aching
except this student isn't sick, he's a fucking fool faking

use your username to battle, you'll win eventually
i'll just use the math term, run it up exponentially


line 7 - username = cosh which is a thick heavy stick or bar used as a weapon
line 8 - "cosh" is also a math term [cosh(x)], also uses exponentials

[WakeUpShow]

pretty good (Y)

you called out openly, that's your first mistake
eight line battle, with rhymes worst than drake

you're gonna nurse and bake, burst and ache
curse and shake, begging to be submersed in a lake

you're as ill as a kid staying home from school aching
except this student isn't sick, he's a fucking fool faking

use your username to battle, you'll win eventually
i'll just use the math term, run it up exponentially

line 7 - username = cosh which is a thick heavy stick or bar used as a weapon
line 8 - "cosh" is also a math term [cosh(x)], also uses exponentials

holy shit, you annihalated.
oh and i forgot to mention, in case you missed it i said talk is cheap, because of your signature

[murphmanny]

meh, i think you got it aha

but change the title to (Vote) so people know to vote

[WakeUpShow]

meh, i think you got it aha

but change the title to (Vote) so people know to vote

alright will do

[Devil'sAdvocate]

murph

[Weather Man]

murph

[WakeUpShow]

looks like you win Murph

[WakeUpShow]

I gotta vote for Murph because he had some harder hitting lines (the last 2 mainly).

Good battle though.

Vote for my battle with Enimee?

sure

[iDEA91]

you called out openly, that's your first mistake
eight line battle, with rhymes worst than drake

That was actually a pretty dope line, good job...

you're gonna nurse and bake, burst and ache
curse and shake, begging to be submersed in a lake

Sounded off flow a big, the "in a" messes that up a little, just sayin

you're as ill as a kid staying home from school aching
except this student isn't sick, he's a fucking fool faking

That was a good use of word play, liked it...

use your username to battle, you'll win eventually
i'll just use the math term, run it up exponentially

I didn't really like this, I mean looking up his name was cool, but it wasn't interesting if you get what I'm sayin, not really a great diss imo

I give MurphManny a 8/10

You say talk is cheap, but a fights expensive.
When I'm done your plastic surgeon will be struggling to pay his expenses.

I can't picture a flow for that, it sounds bad and way too many syllables on the second line...

Your broke ass is on the street juggling just to pay for your fence, bitch.
I'm talking to my mob, like what the hell is the next step...lynch?

Kinda get it, but again, it doesn't flow well, I would practice your flow and counting your syllables... just my opinion

I walked into this battle saying, "Murph? this will be a cinch!"
Just call me the Phillies, from the way that i just clinched.

Rapping a word with the past-tense of that word just doesn't sound right and your flows off again...

I'm runnin circles around you, just to see a fuckin' square wince,
The bitches say I'm Invincible, that's why the call me vince.

Probably the best line out of this, but still not great.

Cosh gets 5/10

I vote MURPHMANNY

I hope none of you take what I say too offensively or seriously, just keepin it real. Thanks

[murphmanny]

thanks for the break down and vote

but i agree with you on most of my points. a few words screwed up flow a bit. this was only my second or third diss, so i'm still learning a bit. thanks for your opinion