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[Darkblade44431]

Ok, Darkblade, let me make things clear for you. Complexity in lyrics gets thrown to the way side because people without a form of intelligence will not be able to comprehend them. You need intelligence to be able to understand and flow with my lyrics, is that a bad thing? No, I just like to reach out to a community where it's not all about shooting bitches and stabbing people. Overly descriptive lyrics are all up to interpretation, and the way I say them are not ''stupid'', on the contrary it's complex. The bars you debunk me for are the ones you don't have a clue on what it is I'm saying. Please if you're going to try to debunk me as a lyricist because of the intelligence level of my shit, then don't read it and don't feel the need to try to belittle me. It doesn't work when your arguements are straw-men.

You still don't understand.
Complexity doesn't mean that it's described in a stupid way. You shouldn't be coinsiding those.

Ok, show me where I describe things in this so called ''stupid way'', go ahead. I'll be waiting.

Went back to something i remember reading before.

Burning desire got me wired, retired for spewing fire
pyro admires the lighters as the eyes I've come to sire
numbed with wires, veins pumped through needles and liquid
to feeble to stop this, my brain is toxic, sad and timid
dimmed for creation, simplified for the detonation of life
then my nation will strike, attack with full blown fury and strife
enough games, time for tough flames and rough lanes of insane
propane induced names, for pain I use my will to hunt my shame
and slice radio waves, propagate my lyrical tapes to generations
to better stations when another rapper like me drops nuclear radiation.

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Now you're just crossing poetry and rap..badly. Poetry can be more descriptive without it being RETARDED. When you rap and try to be like that, and try to add the vicious aspects of rap, you get shit.

[MC Anonymous]

You still don't understand.
Complexity doesn't mean that it's described in a stupid way. You shouldn't be coinsiding those.

Ok, show me where I describe things in this so called ''stupid way'', go ahead. I'll be waiting.

Went back to something i remember reading before.

Burning desire got me wired, retired for spewing fire
pyro admires the lighters as the eyes I've come to sire
numbed with wires, veins pumped through needles and liquid
to feeble to stop this, my brain is toxic, sad and timid
dimmed for creation, simplified for the detonation of life
then my nation will strike, attack with full blown fury and strife
enough games, time for tough flames and rough lanes of insane
propane induced names, for pain I use my will to hunt my shame
and slice radio waves, propagate my lyrical tapes to generations
to better stations when another rapper like me drops nuclear radiation.

-
Now you're just crossing poetry and rap..badly. Poetry can be more descriptive without it being RETARDED. When you rap and try to be like that, and try to add the vicious aspects of rap, you get shit.

Um, excuse me? What you have shown is called, Grade A lyrics. There is nothing retarded about them. Rhyming is perfect, meaning is perfect. I don't see anything wrong with it.

Burning desire got me wired, retired for spewing fire
pyro admires the lighters as the eyes I've come to sire
numbed with wires, veins pumped through needles and liquid
to feeble to stop this, my brain is toxic, sad and timid <--- This is what we call wordplay

dimmed for creation, simplified for the detonation of life
then my nation will strike, attack with full blown fury and strife
enough games, time for tough flames and rough lanes of insane
propane induced names, for pain I use my will to hunt my shame <--- Again, wordplay. Everything I bolded intertwines with each other. Lanes is a symbolism for the music Industry, as Propane induced names follows it up. Then the tough flames part shows how I explode the names of fake rappers. If you can't understand the wordplay don't bother to quote it as ''RETARDED''.

and slice radio waves, propagate my lyrical tapes to generations
to better stations when another rapper like me drops nuclear radiation. Now I'll admit, I don't know why I said Slice radio waves, so you got me there. But the rest should be self explanitory. Propagate means to pass on to the next generation. So I hope that clears things up.

Nice try, care to try to debunk more of my lyrics please?

[Solace]

Owned.

[MC Anonymous]

Owned.

Indeed.

[Darkblade44431]

Maybe some people here can't see what i mean, and it's possible that's true for some of them because they're too caught up in the idea of "godly lyricism". These lyrics don't fit the way you're putting them. It's messed up. And i asked someone else about this, that doesn't go on here, she understands what i'm saying and agrees with me.

[Robbie G]

Me.

[MC Anonymous]

Maybe some people here can't see what i mean, and it's possible that's true for some of them because they're too caught up in the idea of "godly lyricism". These lyrics don't fit the way you're putting them. It's messed up. And i asked someone else about this, that doesn't go on here, she understands what i'm saying and agrees with me.

Ok, so you shouldn't be here if you don't know what lyricism is, plain and simple. Your friend doesn't know what I'm talking about, neither do you, so you automatically assume it's ''retarded''.

Bitch you even asked me for help on some of your lyrics, why the change of heart now? Fucking idiot.

[MC Anonymous]

Me.

[Robbie G]

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[Darkblade44431]

Maybe some people here can't see what i mean, and it's possible that's true for some of them because they're too caught up in the idea of "godly lyricism". These lyrics don't fit the way you're putting them. It's messed up. And i asked someone else about this, that doesn't go on here, she understands what i'm saying and agrees with me.

Ok, so you shouldn't be here if you don't know what lyricism is, plain and simple. Your friend doesn't know what I'm talking about, neither do you, so you automatically assume it's ''retarded''.

Bitch you even asked me for help on some of your lyrics, why the change of heart now? Fucking idiot.

No, when you fuck up the lyrics with stupidity, it's no longer GOOD lyrics. Who are you to judge me on what i think good lyrics are? And i asked you to go over some lyrics of mine, and those were the only ones you even saw, and you said they were good. Rated 8/10, so quit lying your ass off.