i was bored and wrote a short verse..

[iraqi4life]

As i, Start spittin to this beat
all i can think of is to beat
everyone in my sight like a deer
lookin for meat
to eat
so i suggest ya,ll step aside and acknowledge me
coz my lyrics are stronger than a tsunami
and my book of rhymes are larger than a toon-army
my metaphors are never ending like a revolution door
so if u dont want more


pause

how was this?
honestly...?

[Tomega]

short

[Wic Kid]

Dont ever get bored again.



Just kiddin lol. It was pretty bad IMO. The structure was terrible, plus your rhymes were wack. Just keep practisin and you should get better.