Mr. Ree - First Grade Cunt

[Mr. Ree]

if you cross me boy, i promise i'll attack you
like a newborn baby boy, i will smack you
shut up, i will pull out your teeth if i have to
call me the dentist, i'll even wear the mask too!
with my bat i will bat you, quit talking shit
or i'll treat you like a dog, like i'm walking it
put a collar around your neck, if you bark at me
or laugh at me and i will stab you with some carpentry
fuck the saw, i'll gnaw your whole leg off
you must be sore, because i tore your whole head off
now think twice before you talk about me
if you see me i advise you to walk around me
or you'll be in need of some first aid stunts
and it's all because you, are a first grade cunt!

[Mr. Ree]

Ok i will try and use better rhymes next time, thank you! I will post soon!

[Element.]

nice

[Yah-hah]

I dug it homie Yeah better mulits and all that but it was really intertaining. Stay at it homie, I fixin to check out your other drop

[BILI]

Its good man,flow was nice,rhymes were meh,try some better multies like Cole said

[Solace]

It was bad, but you got potential. Welcome to the site dude. Keep at it. Do as Cole said, practice multies. They're pretty much the easiest thing in writing so yeah Punches/wordplay are difficult so when you can get 4 to 4 syllable rhymes you should start 'em.

[Mr. Ree]

It was bad, but you got potential. Welcome to the site dude. Keep at it. Do as Cole said, practice multies. They're pretty much the easiest thing in writing so yeah Punches/wordplay are difficult so when you can get 4 to 4 syllable rhymes you should start 'em.

I don't believe that for one second, I'm sorry.

[Solace]

Okay.

[Mr. Ree]

Cool then.

[Solace]

Indeed.

[Mr. Ree]

I see, you're one of those people who must always get the last word in. I bet you're about 15 or younger, because that's the kind of thing they do. Go ahead, have the last word after this post lad, if it makes you feel like you've won. I surrender.

[Solace]

Won what, lol we weren't arguing. Were we? I was expecting you to respond like "Exactly" or something, you know keep "Okay" "Cool Then" "Indeed" like an awkward conversation. But if I was insulting you in someway sorry.

And naw I'm 14. *Looks at sig

[Edge]

I see, you're one of those people who must always get the last word in. I bet you're about 15 or younger, because that's the kind of thing they do. Go ahead, have the last word after this post lad, if it makes you feel like you've won. I surrender.

lol u obviously looked at his profile to see his age
but anyhow he does know what hes talking about with rap

but on topic... i thought it was a nice, especially for one of ur first drops... u had basic multis which will improve with time... the punchlines were alright, some were bleh and some were nice... so keep at it man

[Yah-hah]

idk Sol. It seems like all the vets say new guys stuff isnt good cause they aint automatically the best on the site. I mean you aint gotta be all lik eit was bad or watever. I liked it thought it was entertaining. But ya aint gotta shoot newer cats down like yall did FnF.

[Mr. Ree]

I see, you're one of those people who must always get the last word in. I bet you're about 15 or younger, because that's the kind of thing they do. Go ahead, have the last word after this post lad, if it makes you feel like you've won. I surrender.

lol u obviously looked at his profile to see his age
but anyhow he does know what hes talking about with rap

but on topic... i thought it was a nice, especially for one of ur first drops... u had basic multis which will improve with time... the punchlines were alright, some were bleh and some were nice... so keep at it man

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