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To the moon and back

Postby Arrinef » Jan 9th, '10, 07:41

went far and wide,i had nothing to hide, i gave you everything you wanted and you still asked why,
it pissed me off crazy, when you said i was lazy, puttin 12 hours daily, still didnt act like it phased me,
did it cause i loved you,and thought that you cared,but i guess i meant shit and the things that we shared
I started growing up and you went back down, frustrated me much, till i took your crown,
you are no longer my queen, and thats okay with me, all i wanted was love and a family,
yeah i went and changed my locks just to keep you out, stop fucking calling me just to cry about,
how bad you miss me, how you made mistakes and now your heart aches,
you had your chance Patricia, and i dont miss ya, we'll probably be friends but i'll never kiss ya,
i'm not good with goodbyes, and im not gonna lie, im sorta hookin up with debbie,
you know the one you didnt like...............................
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Re: To the moon and back

Postby Yah-hah » Jan 9th, '10, 07:45

Haha good shit bro. last line is epic lmao. :y:
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

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Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: To the moon and back

Postby Arrinef » Jan 9th, '10, 08:08

Yah-hah wrote:Haha good shit bro. last line is epic lmao. :y:

thanks man,
appreciate it, i just had to get shit off my chest
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Re: To the moon and back

Postby Yah-hah » Jan 9th, '10, 08:12

Yeah I know wat ya mean
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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