--> C-Riz - I'm On My Grind

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

yeah this is somthin i did back in december...
got this beat from a german producer called UniversalBeatz...


C-Riz - I'm On My Grind
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enjoy it

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goin on a south beat doesnt mean you need to have a stupid south concept thats worse than all the 90000000000000+ songs about bein "on your grind" but really you dont have any stacks in the back, the concept is not you, its fake, you dont even use a metaphor to get it to work.


flow is meh, concept is terrible, lyrics arent good.


disapointed in this man, its just the credability that hurts you here, the beat itself is good for its style but its just not you man and feels really fake and forced.

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

haha aite..i knew no one will like it....but shit im just releasing all my 09 shit day by day...
i scrap everything and work on some brand new shit....so yeah
i respect your opinion and you may be right...but dont wanna explain my point since we wont agree in the end but yeah thanks for checkin man

and thanks pinky

[randomghost]

damn mayne ya good at south stuff..am not a fan of south beats ...beat it seems ya good at it...hook is good...flow is nice..good stuff...keep them coming

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

haha aite..i knew no one will like it....but shit im just releasing all my 09 shit day by day...
i scrap everything and work on some brand new shit....so yeah
i respect your opinion and you may be right...but dont wanna explain my point since we wont agree in the end but yeah thanks for checkin man

and thanks pinky

nah you dont need to explain anything lol, i might have went a bit hard there but youve improved alot i dont wanne see you go on a route of doin stuff like this i mean just look at how many songs are "on my grind" http://www.youtube.com/results?search_q ... =0&spell=1 and even when we got jeezy goin "on his grind" it sucks and has so predictable lines and phrases that it sounds like every other stupid rap song like that.

i thought you were gonni be doin something a little more creative thats all.

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I liked it.

lol yeh well, everyones likes different things, i just heard alot of chris's music since the start and this is a step in the other direction imo so i'm just bein honest

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

yeah i get you bar...its all kool...lemme say i try to reach out into different regions...
dont worry about me turning to a jeezy or soulja boy

propz random

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bump

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last bump aswell