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"Coward"

Postby 2sDay » Jan 10th, '10, 05:44

random drop...bored :coffee:

2sDay is the alpha male, may I offer hell?,
I'm Lucifer's mail, decipher your tale, cause well,
You can tell, damn well, that your jail cell,
Is standing by for fresh meat, flesh to meet,
Greet, heat and eat, and to expand your defeat,
A lot more, tweet, I love to smell the very sweet,
Smell of Larry Pete's cheesy ball-sack, cuz I skeet,
When that greasy stack of joy hangs all night,
Finally I must say the boy bangs, does it feel right?,
Now your real uptight, now I love the healing sight,
Of a blushing kid, looking stupid, a great delight,
Project your ass to your basement, sitting silent,
Signing the Treaty of Ghent, So the horrible event,
Is prevented, well you went to hurt, my two cents,
Before I get your peace offer, just please suffer,
You'll be deceased when I receive it, bloody slaughter,
Body covered in rotting hot burns, well deserved for,
Being a little coward, that sent you to a hospital, showered,
With needles and nurses, cause of my evil curse, you heard,
Now, log in to twitter, and see what absurd debate you stirred,

line 13-17: The Treaty Of Ghent is a treaty between U.K and U.S that ended the War of 1812 but because of bad communication back then people were still killing each other when the signed the treaty. This is a reference to it.
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Re: "Coward"

Postby Spyder » Jan 10th, '10, 05:53

no multies...
and rhyme just to rhyme...
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Re: "Coward"

Postby 2sDay » Jan 10th, '10, 06:43

bump :whistle:
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Re: "Coward"

Postby Yah-hah » Jan 10th, '10, 16:15

It was entertaining. I really dig the treaty reference. It's cool to rhyme just to rhyme sometimes, just try not to make it a habit, cause you'll never get out lol. But your good man don't worry bout it brp just keep doin ya thing
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

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Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: "Coward"

Postby 2sDay » Jan 10th, '10, 17:56

Yah-hah wrote:It was entertaining. I really dig the treaty reference. It's cool to rhyme just to rhyme sometimes, just try not to make it a habit, cause you'll never get out lol. But your good man don't worry bout it brp just keep doin ya thing

thanks bro 4 the feed. :flower:
and btw this is I think my first song that rhymed just to rhyme but I'll try not to get addicted to it :y:
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Re: "Coward"

Postby Yah-hah » Jan 10th, '10, 18:07

Yeah its cool, alot of people get mad when you rhyme just to rhyme, I always do, sometimes just to piss em off :whistle: But I do multis all the time so sometimes its fun to not have a particular subject and just go ya know.
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Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

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Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: "Coward"

Postby 2sDay » Jan 10th, '10, 18:14

Yah-hah wrote:Yeah its cool, alot of people get mad when you rhyme just to rhyme, I always do, sometimes just to piss em off :whistle: But I do multis all the time so sometimes its fun to not have a particular subject and just go ya know.

yeah, i just wanted to try something different like this... :D
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Re: "Coward"

Postby 2sDay » Jan 10th, '10, 19:46

bump :whistle:
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Re: "Coward"

Postby Element. » Jan 11th, '10, 08:23

Not bad. :y:
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Re: "Coward"

Postby 2sDay » Jan 13th, '10, 03:21

Smithy wrote:Not bad. :y:

Thx :)
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Re: "Coward"

Postby Enimee » Jan 13th, '10, 03:29

def like the flow nice verse :y: :y:
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Re: "Coward"

Postby Element. » Jan 17th, '10, 17:41

Just keep at it.
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