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Postby macdaddy019967 » Jan 11th, '10, 08:05

The things you claim to do? is nothin’ tah boast bout
your such an ugly faggot, you had tah come in ya own mouth
This kid’s an inbred reject, who loves fuckin manikins
So ‘Bili’s getting schooled’ like his last name is Madison (Billy Madison)
Haha, n I’m a “mother fucker?”.. LOL.. sorry I had to laugh again!..
After hittin the same vagina your moma tried to tuck you back up in!
I keep my pimp hand strong to rile up these hoes.. n if ya dial up the poes?
you’ll just ‘look like an idiot’, n that’s besides the style of ya clothes
cuz I’ll murk the shit out of you and any army with no prob...
only time you’ve ‘took on a whole squad’ was givin football teams blow jobs
Bili, you know why your lines are hated? Cuz your rhymes are basic
Try and face it.. don’t deny you don’t have the mind tah make it!
I heard you like tah say shit? This is a violent game, snitch
I’ll ‘stick you wit some herion’ and let you “die in vein”, bitch!
Yo I just noticed somethin’.. All this kid does is flow wit dumb shit,
As a child musta been ‘pointed in the wrong direction’ like a “broken compass”
You think your better then my smooth raps? NEWSFLASH! Ya not iller!
N most kids hate you, cuz to us? Your FOOD MAN just chopped liver!
Im a million times better, and can so easily start bashin ya rhymes
So like ‘centerfolds in Playboy mags’, you got your “ass in a bind!”
Murder you all over again? I would never BE HESITATED
They say I was ‘crazy to kill you’ but this was PRE-MEDITATED
I don’t need a switch blade, mixtape, or even a diss made to tear ya face off hater!
And I only need one swing, cuz you’ll ‘run after ya hit’ like a baseball player!
So you might see Bili acting tough, trying to be a wise guy
Til he gets up on the stage and “chokes”.. literally and rhymewise
You’re a lazy coward.. how could you say you have crazy power?!
When all of your punches ‘feel softer’ then baby powder?!
I just embarrassed the shit out of you, so all ya homies know now..
that your lyrics are ‘never too far from bull-shit’ like a Rodeo Clown
Your living-defeat, So winning-this-beef wasn’t a problem, why?
Cuz its facts-nerd.. I always get the ‘last-word!’.. “BOTTOM LINE!”....
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Re: BILI

Postby gutawafang » Jan 11th, '10, 08:09

blahahahahhaahhaha! That was hilarious my man. Awesome I say. Very direct diss.

Man, these beefs still going on huh? :unsure:
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Re: BILI

Postby macdaddy019967 » Jan 11th, '10, 08:11

gutawafang wrote:blahahahahhaahhaha! That was hilarious my man. Awesome I say. Very direct diss.

Man, these beefs still going on huh? :unsure:

yea thanks for the feedback homie this dude should have just kept his mouth shut :smoking:
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Re: BILI

Postby Element. » Jan 11th, '10, 08:16

nice man :y:
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Re: BILI

Postby macdaddy019967 » Jan 11th, '10, 08:19

Smithy wrote:nice man :y:

thanks for the feedback homie im glad you enjoyed it :smoking:
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Re: BILI

Postby Element. » Jan 11th, '10, 08:22

macdaddy019967 wrote:
Smithy wrote:nice man :y:

thanks for the feedback homie im glad you enjoyed it :smoking:



Was funny aswell lol :y:
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Re: BILI

Postby tania » Jan 11th, '10, 08:33

hahahhaa awesome!! :y: :y:
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Re: BILI

Postby Le Tunisien » Jan 11th, '10, 09:21

very good piece for a diss one :y: :smoking: why is this beef happenin anyways
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Re: BILI

Postby macdaddy019967 » Jan 11th, '10, 09:27

le tunisien wrote:very good piece for a diss one :y: :smoking: why is this beef happenin anyways

thanks homie :smoking:
BILI dissed me so i had to reply
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Re: BILI

Postby Le Tunisien » Jan 11th, '10, 09:28

macdaddy019967 wrote:
le tunisien wrote:very good piece for a diss one :y: :smoking: why is this beef happenin anyways

thanks homie :smoking:
BILI dissed me so i had to reply

Hmm good reply though :flower:
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Re: BILI

Postby macdaddy019967 » Jan 11th, '10, 10:28

tania wrote:hahahhaa awesome!! :y: :y:

thanks im glad u liked it :smoking:
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Re: BILI

Postby Fa-Q » Jan 11th, '10, 13:49

I'm sorry Mac...you know I like you but that was weak...I hate all the "tah" instead of the's...but that's just my opinion...why you takin shots at BILI anyway
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Re: BILI

Postby Le Tunisien » Jan 11th, '10, 16:11

Fa-Q wrote:I'm sorry Mac...you know I like you but that was weak...I hate all the "tah" instead of the's...but that's just my opinion...why you takin shots at BILI anyway

obviously cuz bili dissed him?lol
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Re: BILI

Postby BILI » Jan 11th, '10, 17:14

Man it took you 5 days to come wit something like this,lmao :laughing: :laughing: :laughing: :laughing: :laughing: ,and man this is pretty week,you had some good lines,but not one personal,so I dont feel it at all,and main was more simple,but damn,it hited you,cause all I said was truth.I just hope you didnt stole this or something,like you usually do,or maybe you asked someone to write it for you,but its still bad.Try harder next time
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Re: BILI

Postby macdaddy019967 » Jan 11th, '10, 20:26

BILI wrote:Man it took you 5 days to come wit something like this,lmao :laughing: :laughing: :laughing: :laughing: :laughing: ,and man this is pretty week,you had some good lines,but not one personal,so I dont feel it at all,and main was more simple,but damn,it hited you,cause all I said was truth.I just hope you didnt stole this or something,like you usually do,or maybe you asked someone to write it for you,but its still bad.Try harder next time

of course i expected that reply from you
but read your own garbage before you judge my shit
your shit is wack as hell
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