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Biterphobia (Edge's Version)

Postby Edge » Jan 11th, '10, 08:04

I feel like I should spit some written domination
because to me biting is a fucken abomination
If he wasn’t in my old crew, I wouldn’t bring it up
But like an outer leaf of a dutch I gotta steam it up
Putting u with me? that’s a joke, wel never even up
U ever get better than me, u ought to dream it up
I don’t want it to be like this, id like to be cool
U did it before, we let it slide, but twice, ur a sorry fool
But if u cant sit down and spit something original
Well than honestly, u shouldn’t even spit at all
Its unfortunate, cause we come from the same hood
Making Staten look bad, man, that just aint good
if u bite again, bring ya squad, il check u like Nike Flight Crew
And listen man, I don’t really wanna start, I like u
But I cant be seen as big-upin biters so I hadda protest
as long as u don’t bite again, u won’t watch bulets in yo chest
be the best you can be, and if thats not good enough for people... than fuck em
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Re: Biterphobia (Edge's Version)

Postby Element. » Jan 11th, '10, 08:17

Nice your getting better :y:
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Re: Biterphobia (Edge's Version)

Postby Yah-hah » Jan 11th, '10, 08:24

I dig it man, shots at BB but brought on himself. Good shit bro
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Re: Biterphobia (Edge's Version)

Postby Edge » Jan 11th, '10, 09:54

thanks guys :b:
be the best you can be, and if thats not good enough for people... than fuck em
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Re: Biterphobia (Edge's Version)

Postby gutawafang » Jan 11th, '10, 09:54

ha. pretty good man. it flows. not so fiery though.
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Re: Biterphobia (Edge's Version)

Postby Edge » Jan 11th, '10, 09:55

gutawafang wrote:ha. pretty good man. it flows. not so fiery though.


what exactly does fiery mean?
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Re: Biterphobia (Edge's Version)

Postby gutawafang » Jan 11th, '10, 09:58

Edge wrote:
gutawafang wrote:ha. pretty good man. it flows. not so fiery though.


what exactly does fiery mean?

It kinda means fire-y. Overall, I won't say it's fire. but it's still cool man. ;)
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Re: Biterphobia (Edge's Version)

Postby Edge » Jan 11th, '10, 10:00

gutawafang wrote:
Edge wrote:
gutawafang wrote:ha. pretty good man. it flows. not so fiery though.


what exactly does fiery mean?

It kinda means fire-y. Overall, I won't say it's fire. but it's still cool man. ;)


haha allright thanks man
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Re: Biterphobia (Edge's Version)

Postby Mr.Shady21 » Jan 12th, '10, 00:53

this is what happens when you steal shit lmaooo
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Re: Biterphobia (Edge's Version)

Postby Just Silver » Jan 12th, '10, 01:34

i was expecting a fast biterphobia like writting style this was good but not what iwas expecting

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Re: Biterphobia (Edge's Version)

Postby macdaddy019967 » Jan 12th, '10, 01:41

good piece man :smoking:
and I know its a weird question but who are you directing this to?
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Re: Biterphobia (Edge's Version)

Postby classthe_king » Jan 12th, '10, 01:43

macdaddy019967 wrote:good piece man :smoking:
and I know its a weird question but who are you directing this to?


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Re: Biterphobia (Edge's Version)

Postby macdaddy019967 » Jan 12th, '10, 01:43

classthe_king wrote:
macdaddy019967 wrote:good piece man :smoking:
and I know its a weird question but who are you directing this to?


Bullet Boy

oh ok thanks :smoking:
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Re: Biterphobia (Edge's Version)

Postby Just Silver » Jan 12th, '10, 01:56

i was expecting a fast biterphobia like writing style this was good but not what iwas expecting

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Re: Biterphobia (Edge's Version)

Postby Solace » Jan 12th, '10, 03:24

smh JS @ double post

Good piece dude, best part:

Putting u with me? that’s a joke, wel never even up
U ever get better than me, u ought to dream it up
I don’t want it to be like this, id like to be cool
U did it before, we let it slide, but twice, ur a sorry fool
But if u cant sit down and spit something original
Well than honestly, u shouldn’t even spit at all
Its unfortunate, cause we come from the same hood
Making Staten look bad, man, that just aint good

You're getting there, keep at it :y:
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