PLEASE FEED ME ---- IM HUNGRY!!!!

[Tash8]

uh if opposites attracts
then why do people talk, dress and act
walk step and rap so exact and so similar
bumping new music yet it sounds so familiar
hearing rappers going ten percent, knowing that it never ends
got me flowin' temper fits of temperments, I guess that its
the thing that makes me so different
wait a minute though,
I'm on the other side of the barrel
ya know?
the one that no one even cares for
I must be the apple, cause i always think different
my entire life and every minute i've been in it, I feel so gifted
i'm home alone so that means no one's here to hear or listen in
and they wonder what I do to stand out
once I step on the turf, they know who's the man now
and I don't want your help, i ain't lookin for no handouts

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the past month or two got the luck a bitch do
only if you knew what the fuck I been through
you'da known, just how long, it would take to move on
guess it's karma knocking, "knock-knock, who's home
is it you, is it her? "
why'd you have to use such harsh and bitter words
not another damn excuse, don't you dare to gimme yours
now before I bite my tongue again, damn I'll learn to speak
and since i'm hooked on vicodin, I've finally learned to sleep
you better fuckin quite then you don't know how i feel
(sigh) there I go again, with my angst I adhere
like a medical disease, I am the epidemy
i've got a lot to learn, a spot on top to earn
but I'm not even concerned cause I will not be burned
and you can see why, i'll be fine in the meantime
untill we're old and senile, then you will see why
when you think I'm buried that's when I dig out my grave
then I'll grab the pen and turn and burn the fuckin page

[Edge]

this is a good example of why structure isnt important
the structure wasnt what people concider good but it flowed for me very easily
and i felt like u actualy felt what you wrote
nice drop man

[Edge]

some creative multis too

the only complaint i have with this peice is that some of the bars didnt rhyme, but its all good u made it work

[Tash8]

thanks a lot bro

and the bars that u think don't rhyme usually do rhyme but i have to say it differently soo i can understand!

[Edge]

haha i feel ya... its hard to read a rap without hearing it spit... i dont think u can really appreciate a rap without hearing and seeing the lyrics

[Enimee]

hard shit man madd propz for real

[Tash8]

hard shit man madd propz for real

thx man

[Tash8]

lol

[Tash8]

bump

[mcZu]

I like the rhyme scheme, it makes it flow easy and smooth. I love the Apple punch and the content is expressed pretty well. Nice job Tash, keep this shit up.

[Tash8]

I like the rhyme scheme, it makes it flow easy and smooth. I love the Apple punch and the content is expressed pretty well. Nice job Tash, keep this shit up.

thanks bud, i already recorded these two verses and the songs should be getting released soon, if you want to hear them rapped.

[classthe_king]

It's alright but you need to step up your multis

[Tash8]

It's alright but you need to step up your multis

ha ha

[gutawafang]

Good flow man.

First verse better than second verse in my opinion.

Good storytelling.

[Tash8]

propz man