fuck fake emcees

by **Edge** » Jan 15th, '10, 08:36

im getting sick or rappers in this day and age
they dont pick up a pen and just slay the page
and if u act against me, i will display my rage
i spit with raps wisdom, best to obey this sage
im trying to progress, so dont delay this stage
hip-hop locks me down, i cant betray the cage
and i pray we wage, war cause i will destroy
Achilles without the heal, you cant kill me, boy
i got no weaknesses, one hundred percent strength
you fuckers came up short, but me i went the length
i fought my battles as u rats just saught to tattle
i speak the real talk, u just brought the prattle
talking bout shit, that doesnt make some sence
these rappers insulting the game and i take offence

by **Tash8** » Jan 15th, '10, 08:38

YEAH FUCK FAKE EMCEESS!!!!!!!

by **Edge** » Jan 15th, '10, 08:39

Tash8 wrote:YEAH FUCK FAKE EMCEESS!!!!!!!

word lol feeds appreciated

by **Fa-Q** » Jan 15th, '10, 09:21

Damn this is good...lovin the multis...good structure...maybe a bit more wordplay but that's it...good drop, we should collab again

by **Edge** » Jan 15th, '10, 09:23

Fa-Q wrote:Damn this is good...lovin the multis...good structure...maybe a bit more wordplay but that's it...good drop, we should collab again

thanks man and we really should colab again... im going to bed soon, but definently hit me up anytime tomorrow and wel come up with something

by **Tash8** » Jan 15th, '10, 09:25

ok decent piece, but you had REAL weak rhymes, content was good but too cliche.. kinda boring verse.

by **Edge** » Jan 15th, '10, 09:26

Tash8 wrote:ok decent piece, but you had REAL weak rhymes, content was good but too cliche.. kinda boring verse.

thanks for ur honesty

by **Edge** » Jan 15th, '10, 19:17

by **2sDay** » Jan 15th, '10, 19:23

I thought it was a great piece not ur best though...
My only complaint is that you had simple rhymes like: age, cage, rage, stage...
I do that sometimes too :'(

Good multis too :y:

Overall: Great piece, 7.5/10

by **Edge** » Jan 15th, '10, 19:42

word, i realize that age/page/rage are simple rhymes... thats y i didnt just rhyme age with page... i rhymed "day and age" with "slay the page" and "display myh rage" etc.

by **Tash8** » Jan 15th, '10, 19:46

Edge wrote:word, i realize that age/page/rage are simple rhymes... thats y i didnt just rhyme age with page... i rhymed "day and age" with "slay the page" and "display myh rage" etc.

still pretyy weak...slay/day/display are also weak rhymes, jusst cause ur using multis doesnt excuse poor rhyming.

by **classthe_king** » Jan 15th, '10, 19:49

Yeah those rhymes are pretty weak. Rhymes like barrel/care for are much better :y:

by **Edge** » Jan 15th, '10, 19:52

word i feel ya

by **Edge** » Jan 15th, '10, 20:05

classthe_king wrote:Yeah those rhymes are pretty weak. Rhymes like barrel/care for are much better

maybe its my NY accent but i cant get barrel and care for to rhyme

by **2sDay** » Jan 15th, '10, 20:07

Edge wrote:
classthe_king wrote:Yeah those rhymes are pretty weak. Rhymes like barrel/care for are much better

maybe its my NY accent but i cant get barrel and care for to rhyme

neither can I? :unsure:

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