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im tryna break that single

Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Jan 16th, '10, 02:39

i walk in confident swagger took my smoke out lit it
you an 11 in blackjack im always going to hit it
shes goin to walk away till she clicks on what i say
then we finally part ways like..the next day
when shes leaving my house after i was teasin her blouse
and i felt like i was teething so i went down south
thats was special for you its not my course of action
so get your ass up resume the course of action
ofcourse im acting coz your close to average
i couldnt really care if your dyke or a savage
just get your legs open to i can start smashhing
it aint my fault im addicted to this
and if you want it on your chest guess ill take a piss
im down for whatever anything you wanne do
just remeber this is sex never say i love you
infact i think were over had enough of you

bridge
coz i will fuck any girl that like
tampon move it away its all right
im the sorta guy that wants to go all night
and if your down for that girl come lets go rightx2

chorus
so get the girls, girls i love girls
i dont find it tragic im close to an addict
when yer dad gets home hide me up in the attic
so i can watch your mum and dad get at it
girls, girls i love girls
i dont find it tragic im close to an addict
when yer dad gets home hide me up in the attic
so i can watch your mum and dad get at it


yeh its a work in pregress, tryna break that single that will apeal..but keep it lyrically decent
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Re: im tryna break that single

Postby Tash8 » Jan 16th, '10, 02:40

is it a picture though?
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Re: im tryna break that single

Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Jan 16th, '10, 02:41

yeh someone move this :laughing:
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Re: im tryna break that single

Postby B.A.D. » Jan 16th, '10, 05:28

,-,'-{Bar}-',-, wrote:yeh someone move this :laughing:


LMAOOOO hahahahaha :worship: :laughing: :laughing:
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Re: im tryna break that single

Postby dR3 » Jan 16th, '10, 05:57

Tash8 wrote:is it a picture though?

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Re: im tryna break that single

Postby Slimm » Jan 16th, '10, 13:27

Bar spent so much time posting pics he forgot where to put his lyrics :shifty:
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Re: im tryna break that single

Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Jan 16th, '10, 18:00

yes he did :(


now feedback bitches!
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