.::A Lot To Learn (Prod. By: Life & Death)::. Vettori & Tash

[Arrinef]

pretty dope track man

i can sense the hunger in your voice, and delivery

top notch shit

[Steve Spag]

Canada!
Another great track, as I expected. Both verses were written quite well and the delievery from both of you was above average! Tash, you're really getting better with your pronunciation, props on that 'cause I know it can be a bitch.

Keep it up guys!

[Tash8]

pretty dope track man

i can sense the hunger in your voice, and delivery

top notch shit

thanks bro

Canada!
Another great track, as I expected. Both verses were written quite well and the delievery from both of you was above average! Tash, you're really getting better with your pronunciation, props on that 'cause I know it can be a bitch.

Keep it up guys!

yeah i struggle with it at times but i'm workin it.. but thanks man! i repped canada woooo

[lifeadeath]

P.S, Life and Death, are you god?

Hmm, I think I'm not But thanks for all the feedback in my part too

[Vettori]

ye i get yu...like i said it's probably similar because we are from the same areas, so theres no accent dividing us.. Hey it's ur opinion. and im glad u gave it. Lets me know that there may be a few tweaks i need to make.. Im no pro, so the advice is good.. it's truely just hard to deal with Especially when it's me who put the work in.. I get yu tho, but yu really gotta think about what grabs attention, and the road i know doesnt do that...is the slow paced..1 word syllables like

Play/day/Hey/Raise etc.. it's a challenge for me to write a complex song that sounds natural.. Where everything comes out without being forced..and The Concept is right there..i mean maybe i coulda gone into more depth. but hey, im still gettin better too.

Btw seen yu had a song in audio section...gonna check it when i get back from work...

AND yea guys Life & Death Makes some sick Instrumentals this one when i heard it, im like WOW i could do sumthin nice on it haha So great work on the production part

Thanks for the beat, tash, Thanks for your time

[Tornado]

Beat is cool gotta slightly dark Em vibe and Vet, your verse is sick, i feel the better verse, flowed better than tash but you are reminsicent of Em but still dope to listen to.

The chorus...don't like it, i see the idea of the flow but the delievery didn't do it justice, probably more suited to a singer imo

tash, your verse was alot more simple, less syllables and didn't flow as smooth but was still enjoyable to listen to. Just though you could've been a bit more agressive with the delievery but overall it's a solid 8/10 track, definite replay value

[Vettori]

Thanks for checkin and leaving feedback.. The chorus takes some adjusting too, seeing how it's not the simple catchy 2 word Hook. and repeat lol..if u give it a few listens im sure it'll grow on ya for me i was iffy about it when i first did it, now i cant see it being done any other way :P

Quality for recording isn't the greatest either so. when i make a mistake with pitch it shows. But anyways i think it was great on my behalf and Tash really stepped up. Im glad we did this.

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

mixing was bad on vettori's verse...but then nice on the hook..
tash his verse was well mixed...
about delivery...tash you improved as bar said...you did good on that...vet was decent tho
flow-wise both of you shined....vet was SICK on the beginning...
but as chambers said...the content didnt really go along with the beat....like you wear a red sock on your right foot and a blue sock on your left (wtf )
well yeah..but you both hold it down...
i wouldnt say its a tr's renegade but its defo a TR classic

[Enimee]

mixing was bad on vettori's verse...but then nice on the hook..
tash his verse was well mixed...
about delivery...tash you improved as bar said...you did good on that...vet was decent tho
flow-wise both of you shined....vet was SICK on the beginning...
but as chambers said...the content didnt really go along with the beat....like you wear a red sock on your right foot and a blue sock on your left (wtf )
well yeah..but you both hold it down...
i wouldnt say its a tr's renegade but its defo a TR classic

i agree on some parts, like i heard the beat and read the lyircs before vets verse started and was like...idk if this is gonna flow right like i thought it was gonna be off but uhh
you def surprised me and pulled that shit off nice, better then i could of thats for sure...
vet you def dont have an amazing singer voice (no offence) but the way you did it was melodic in a way so congrats

sweet fuckin track im gonna listen to it again

[Vettori]

Thanks man, yea im no singer, but it's like the way nate dogg does it(without the deep Voice), can bring a hook in make it sound decent. Better then rapping a hook IMO.....too plain haha thanks for checkin

[Le Tunisien]

wow sick joint
vettori's flow was really impressing,i loved it
i dont agree with people saying you sound like eminem,i think you sound like vettori
,keep doing ya thang man, 9/10
Tash's verse was nice too,some deep lines,the flow was locked,i liked it but at the end of your verse i feel like there somethin wrong that i dont like,maybe the ending or something or when you say "i will not lose will will not lose" anyways ur verse 8/10

keep up the good work guys,i love this track definetly has great replay value

[Vettori]

Thanks alot yo. Thanks for taking time to feed. Tash deserves alot of credit here...heald his own

some say he heald it better than I

any new songs u workin on Le ? lemme know when yu drop a sick joint, ill give it a listen

[Dark Blue]

great job to both of you i listened to this last night but forgot to leave a comment, but anyways you both killed it. keep it up

[Vettori]

Ahhh yeee Thanks for checkin it. Hopin to kill another track...Once im through being sick..."Caugh caugh" ill get back into writing some more, I tend to get Mind blocked when im sick. ugh. Thanks to everyone who Commented. Ill return the favor if you pm me anytime

[randomghost]

beat is nice... i like ya delivery vettori....flow is good nice mixing...good stuff man..am feelin ya verse...hook is nice..singing is ok..could be better...tash ya verse is ok..didnt like da mastering...mixing was ok....flow is nice....delivery is nice.....good song guys..keep them coming