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mobster blues

Postby Edge » Jan 16th, '10, 08:39

my friend Ghanja God was telling me about mobster movies so i came up with this rap when we were chilling... feed appreciated

if you owe us money, wel find you, it aint even funny
I'l 'massacre ya boy' with more bullets than Sonny
smash you in your head with a bottle of wine
I knock you fuckers over like I topple my rhymes
chilling with topless dimes, in resturaunts smokin cigars
and if i need to, i find you, youl get smoked in the bar
and I kill on anyday, even my daughters wedding day
so either way, in the end you're getting sprayed
I bring down the mobsters, with my gat, not like Eliot Ness
and I aint talking Halloween, when I send shells to ya chest
wer blessed, because wer the best at smuggeling alchohol in
you're a foot away from the grave, and you're bout to fall in
death is calling, cause the Godfather is on your back
but I aint going to die, from a fucken heart attack
I'm a 'prodigy' who wreaks 'havoc' when I bring my 'mob deep'
I kill you fuckers quickly cause im blessed with God speed
Last edited by Edge on Jan 16th, '10, 10:32, edited 2 times in total.
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Re: mobster blues

Postby Fa-Q » Jan 16th, '10, 08:42

That Elliot Ness line was used by fif...pretty good drop...it would be a lot easier to read if you capalized "I's" and didn't say "u" for you...idk just a thought...liked the drop tho
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Re: mobster blues

Postby Edge » Jan 16th, '10, 08:45

Fa-Q wrote:That Elliot Ness line was used by fif...pretty good drop...it would be a lot easier to read if you capalized "I's" and didn't say "u" for you...idk just a thought...liked the drop tho


check the edit, I changed the line, I didnt know with 50, and did the I/you
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Re: mobster blues

Postby Enimee » Jan 16th, '10, 16:37

i like this real uhh thuggish lol nice tho =D> =D>
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Re: mobster blues

Postby Edge » Jan 16th, '10, 20:31

Enimee wrote:i like this real uhh thuggish lol nice tho =D> =D>


thanks man, appreciate it
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Re: mobster blues

Postby Edge » Jan 16th, '10, 22:28

bump
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