Slimsoxshady vs Strictt Ame

[slimsoxshady]

8 lines.
I'll drop in a bit

[Spyder]

whose strictt ame

[slimsoxshady]

I'll be real strict in this battle, though I shoulda left the call out restricted
But since he picked it, I gotta box him up so he can say that he's gifted
I rap this and make your back twist to a cracked disk, stick it to you like cactus
Catch you like catfish and lay you down like a mattress marked X on the atlas
Try and combat this, I light shit up like I swallowed a lamp when its on
Only girl Strictt ever went "out" with is when he went camping with mom
Stick you on top of an iceberg, leave you frozen in your tracks
Cuz this battle's "fucking over" like you took a pole in from the back
Bolts inside my sack, plus I cum fire like light to nozzle
Only way you're ever hard in the real world is when they find your fossil

Line 8: think about what "fucking over" means if you didn't get it
Line 10: listen to some of his songs in his sig; he goes in pretty hard

EDIT: Oh shit, i just realized this is 10 lines...sorry, my bad dude. Would it be a problem for you to add 2 more lines? If it is I can take out 2 lines if you want.

[classthe_king]

whose strictt ame

He battled Boston in the Iron Mic site battle. He's legit.

[Spyder]

i didnt know Boston battled

did he win? wtf were the results of that god damn thing anyhow

[classthe_king]

i didnt know Boston battled

did he win? wtf were the results of that god damn thing anyhow

Strict ko'd him

[Strictt Ame]

Who woulda guessed..
I’d be battlin a guy quotin Soulja Boy, this bitch-is-depressed
So I’ll put ‘Sox on his ass’ like ‘Blind kids-gettin-dressed’
Kick’em just like-rocks until his gums bleed and his eyes-pop
Talkin gangsta, I’ll drop you in ‘Chicago’ now see that ya ‘White-Sox’?
We all know-that-ya-lyin, ya throat I’ll choke-till-ya-dyin
And ‘get rid of SlimFast’ but no I’m not ‘focused-on-diets’
Please-ya-flowin..sounds you got gingivitis and ya teeth-corroded
So the only time your seein a ‘win(d)sox’ to see if the ‘breeze-is-blowin’ [Windsock]

Its already over the last bar you’ll get chopped-n-bombed
Fuck 10 you can barely handle ‘8, kid’ you’re the new ‘octo-mom’

[Enimee]

punches - stricct
personals- stricct
multies - slim
flow - stricct
structure - slim
vocab/complex - slim
other - stricct

i really liked the slimfast bar he came in real hard so i gave him the other cat on account of that, and slimm smuthered the drop with multis it was almost too much so work on that not every two words has to be a multi and if it is you gotta make it flow better then you did slim, buut they were there and consistent so you got that cat ,

stricct had the punches flow and personals cats cause he stayed on the attack with the references to the sox in the middle of his name and and the sig hit....and it flowed pretty good even though it was ill-structured his verbage and multis made it more interestin and it was a solid drop for sure

over all great battle if you hadnt smuthered your drop wit multis like that and added a few more soldi punches slim you wouda took it for sure
but yeah it is as is clap clap

GOOD FUCKIN BATTLE

[Strictt Ame]

Thanks for droppin a vote 1-0

[slimsoxshady]

didn't think a 5 post guy had that in him...the white sox and slimfast and windsock lines were mad creative. Sick drop. I kinda want a rematch though...so let me know if you're down for 8 more when you got time (def 8 this time lol)

[2sDay]

i hate strictt ame for his fucking chucky sig and avatar....
i'm so scared of chucky...

[Strictt Ame]

Cole..IM is dying off so I needed somewhere to battle and post my shit n what not, so I figured Ive already signed up here, why not just start postin..

SlimSox..never underestimate..lol just cuz Im new here doesnt mean I dont know anything..and yeh im down for a rematch..just let me know..

[Element.]

i hate strictt ame for his fucking chucky sig and avatar....
i'm so scared of chucky...

Lol thats beacause even your rhymes couldnt free you

[Strictt Ame]

Word, fansites never go dead..but at the same time they usually have alot of underpar talent..so hopefully I can figure who is who real quick..too bad I missed the tournament, oh well..guess I know who Im shootin for now..lol

[Strictt Ame]

2sday, Smithy..while I dont mind you in here..either vote or take it elsewhere..the comment on my sig wouldve been done in my introduction thread..