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Buncha punches verse

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Buncha punches verse

Postby Just Silver » Jan 17th, '10, 02:45

Have had a busy weekend couldnt write so i just wanted to see if could get more feed on an old rap verse i had that didnt get too many views







Just Silver:
I stay frequently speaking the decency of my own "eatery",
shown these "MCs" I've ate beef recently ,blood guts in my teething ring,
bust "nuts" in a "tree" ,of these "families" ,damn right i get my needs,
slam slightly forward breathe, a crashing death of word metaphoric-ally,
best enjoy the "feat", of my testing of the weak ,pestering then chief
a pound of weed, lit up around the week, so damn you "down" for me
cause i cant, be too "high" to "under"-stand spit so hot make glass when i cover sand, im a task that should be "banned" try to be at my top "C-Stars" the way i "rock", Believer or not ,i make sluts Sack- Religious and worship my cock,
See i take these paltry pastry mcs on the pantry, awfully been against me because i rip it too "sweet" 14 shots your "too weak" pig flow gotta eat em all ..Suey! too great sue me so "grate" and flow deep. No breaks I dont sleep so fakes i warn these people i do more "beams" then local bakeries meaning the "cake or cream" if you cant relate to my get the fuck out of the family.
I answer all "F-AQs" and get "green" like "Eses" you should do an essay too
this is the best damn crew "for-umm" i forgot score one for the block this collab needs "threads" like a rich mans "bed top" i will keeping thinking till my head pops
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Re: Buncha punches verse

Postby Yah-hah » Jan 17th, '10, 04:40

Hahahaha I remember the one we did lmao.
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

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Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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