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Re: BILI

Postby BILI » Jan 11th, '10, 22:11

macdaddy019967 wrote:
BILI wrote:Man it took you 5 days to come wit something like this,lmao :laughing: :laughing: :laughing: :laughing: :laughing: ,and man this is pretty week,you had some good lines,but not one personal,so I dont feel it at all,and main was more simple,but damn,it hited you,cause all I said was truth.I just hope you didnt stole this or something,like you usually do,or maybe you asked someone to write it for you,but its still bad.Try harder next time

of course i expected that reply from you
but read your own garbage before you judge my shit
your shit is wack as hell

man you failed in that diss at so many points.You said some thing about me that have nothing to do wit me,and everything was really week man,you maybe have better rhymes then me,but to be honest this is a BAD diss,put some personals next time,make it harder,please :wave:

plus it took you 5 days,5 days to write this whack shit :shakehead:
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Re: BILI

Postby Arabian Shady » Jan 11th, '10, 22:18

i think this shit is dope
loadsa punches, metaphores..flow was good too
Beef aside, i digg the verse
Good shit man, nice to see the MAC hittin hard :b:
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So when we face rage, Ya'll fake it and let THEM commit horrific crimes
50 years & going straight, Yet this performance aint worth your time,OUR
Shit is BACKSTAGE,Cause the front page aint worth Kashmir and Palestine.
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Re: BILI

Postby Edge » Jan 11th, '10, 23:53

nice verse man but i think u need more personals in oreder to make it a good diss... so as a diss i didnt like it.... but as a rap i thought it was nice
be the best you can be, and if thats not good enough for people... than fuck em
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Re: BILI

Postby macdaddy019967 » Jan 12th, '10, 01:14

Edge wrote:nice verse man but i think u need more personals in oreder to make it a good diss... so as a diss i didnt like it.... but as a rap i thought it was nice

thnaks arabian shady and edge for the honest feedback i appreciate it :smoking:
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Re: BILI

Postby macdaddy019967 » Jan 12th, '10, 01:16

BILI wrote:
macdaddy019967 wrote:
BILI wrote:Man it took you 5 days to come wit something like this,lmao :laughing: :laughing: :laughing: :laughing: :laughing: ,and man this is pretty week,you had some good lines,but not one personal,so I dont feel it at all,and main was more simple,but damn,it hited you,cause all I said was truth.I just hope you didnt stole this or something,like you usually do,or maybe you asked someone to write it for you,but its still bad.Try harder next time

of course i expected that reply from you
but read your own garbage before you judge my shit
your shit is wack as hell

man you failed in that diss at so many points.You said some thing about me that have nothing to do wit me,and everything was really week man,you maybe have better rhymes then me,but to be honest this is a BAD diss,put some personals next time,make it harder,please :wave:

plus it took you 5 days,5 days to write this whack shit :shakehead:

it didnt take me five days to write it
but i have something called a life where i have to find some spare time to waste and respond to you
so no not 5 days and thanks for checking out my shit though :smoking:
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Re: BILI

Postby Element. » Jan 17th, '10, 23:35

I found this funny and liked it :worship:
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Re: BILI

Postby macdaddy019967 » Jan 18th, '10, 08:11

Smithy wrote:I found this funny and liked it :worship:

thanks smithy i haven't seen you on tr for a moment i appreciate the feedback :smoking:
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Re: BILI

Postby Element. » Jan 18th, '10, 08:23

macdaddy019967 wrote:
Smithy wrote:I found this funny and liked it :worship:

thanks smithy i haven't seen you on tr for a moment i appreciate the feedback :smoking:


Yeah not been on for a few days, so i just came back again :y:
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