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Random Rhyming...

Postby EminemBase » Jan 18th, '10, 11:42

I'm a pretty good writer or so I've been told (and I feel myself), as in... General writing. Literacy.

I've never been that good at actual rhyming though. I'm 19 now, I used to mess around with it like... 13-16, just writing random little freestyles and recording for a laugh.

I'm not aspiring to be a rapper but I do like the challenge of trying to rhyme well. I just wrote this in five minutes, just let it continue to flow... Appreciate any feedback. It's pretty shit lmao...

A consid-erable lyrical maestro
Permissable and cynical when fights go...
OFF and I run off into the night smoke...
-Chok-ing as run, no fun because I smoke
Dee-sgus-ting tabacco and tar, smoke...Ers
Usually go before their time so, I'm gonna try quit that shit just in time
Though, everybody says that and Im saying that just to rhyme so...
Dont take it literal or take it literally like crime folk
I don't smoke weed yes I conceed I don't like dope smoke
I'd much rather pop 3 or 4 pills straight down my throat, gulp
Get airy-fairy and go overboard of the-boat
A few grams of coke up my nose and what I need is an inhailer
Constant heart issues, as if my body is a failure


Even though it may look like it, I'm not copying Em with pill talk lol. I really have spent my late teens just abusing drugs. I'm not talking about it like it's a good thing but I don't have much else to rhyme about lmao. My life has just been drug experimentation for the past few years.

I just can't seem to transfer my writing skills into rhyming skills. I might just keep practicing to see how good I can get though and then record some shit soon for my own entertainment. Hone it haha.
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