Enimee VS Shadyfreakzul(Enimee Wins)

[shadyfreakzul]

12 lines
no flipping


I've gotten over my last battle with smithy like my ex
and ready to slaughter wack mcs with the mic am blessed
I aint even started with punches but i kick it like this
with my rhyming skills kicking you out of the army like bis
Cuz when i battle no one comes close am sorta like an orphan
get close and get your as murdered like Rachel Hoffman
Your chance of surviving this battle as a soldier is half(0.5)
but this is a rap battle so knockout is what you deserve
Dont understand? Retard am gonna make my lines too lucid
for your wack ass to understand and look stupid
Enemy(Enimee) my lyrics capturing you like a digital cam
and if i get caught, admin will charge me with lyrical scam.

line 4:his profile says he works in the army and canibus was kicked out of the army
line6:rachel hoffman is a murdered police informant http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Rachel_Hoffman
line7:his status as a soldier(when a soldier battles his chance of surving is .5 because he either lives or dies)
line9 and 10:explaining some line after the battle for the retard to understand

[Element.]

I've gotten over my last battle with smithy like my ex

How is this a hit or personal
Lol why would he care if i beat you ? and that u got over it.. Why would you even need to get over it did i hit that hard?

[Enimee]

since the birth of rap i been versin cats with more perversive tracks
how you gonna hurt me brat your in training and the worst in fact
at battlin drop it stop babblin your ass is not hot im not havin it
damnit kid ill seriously give you brain damage if you keep on that shady shit
you fakin shit ill play like smith and straight break your limbs cause im
first and foremost a boss in rhyme and you wouldnt toss a nine
reachin both hands in the sky with a finger missin off the right
each bar you write is not hard or nice in fact its far from like
any possibility of sharp or tight so stop or get scarred with ice
killed with mics cause my skills is like the last letter of the alphabet
zebra flow highly anticipated and im way better then any veteran
underrated and you aint even a Letter thats ever been said

line2: in training peep his disc.
line4: first part of his name is shady
line6&7: amount of fingers he'd have with both hands in the sky and one missin
last two lines baisically sayin that compared to me he never existed


oh and peep the first letter of each line if it aint blatent enough

[shadyfreakzul]

Nice Battle Enimee.
Guys you can vote now.

[Spyder]

(3) Punches - En
(3) Personals - En
(2) Multies - En
(1) Flow - Shady
(1)Complex - En
(1)Structure - Shady
(1)Other - En with his name written down the side

En gets it

[shadyfreakzul]

ok 1-0 for Enimee

[Element.]

(3) Punches - En
(3) Personals - En
(2) Multies - En
(1) Flow - Shady
(1)Complex - En
(1)Structure - Shady
(1)Other - En with his name written down the side

En gets it

I agree

[Strictt Ame]

(3) Punches - Enimee
(3) Personals - Enimee
(2) Multies - Enimee
(1) Flow - Tie
(1)Complex - Enimee
(1)Structure - Tie
(1)Other - Tie


Shady, your line just didnt connect at all, the wording was basic and didnt support your punches too well..also your personals were weak, they couldve been more complex and/or descriptive..

Enimee, not a great verse but it was enough for the W..punches werent too hard hittin..

Vote - Enimee

[Element.]

En Wins Suprise