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Great Depression

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Great Depression

Postby Strictt Ame » Jan 18th, '10, 20:19

Livin in this Depression got me experiencing pain-and-terror
Survivin in the era I refer to as the post Bush reign-of-error
Cats blabbin on how they gonna start clappin-and-hurt-me
But the shit we see today aint nuthin like back-in-the-30’s
Watchin the news everyday hearin about society-in-description
Makes me feel like Im only here thanks to a variety-of-prescriptions
Im anxieties-contradiction, and I continue to put belief-in-Obama
Cuz hes just like me, don’t take bullshit and aint needin-this-drama
Ease the pain with a walk downtown, the homeless bother-me-there
Askin for change, motherfucker I aint even got a dollar-to-spare
When I get home I holler-n-swear, but it aint funny-Im-hyper
I got work overtime all the time, just to get money-for-daipers
24/7 hustling, this shit feels like Im back in the jail-house
Got me like man FUCK AIG, where the hell is my bail-out
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Re: Great Depression

Postby dsmith » Jan 18th, '10, 20:22

nice stuff bro
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Re: Great Depression

Postby Spyder » Jan 18th, '10, 20:49

pretty dope, i thought this piece was better than the punchlines one
the money for diapers line reminded me of Rock Bottom.
message was good, lyrics were all there. nothing really stuck out
but idk if you just write alot, i know you battle so

good piece bro
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