Ruthless - I Dont Wanna Talk About It

[Tranquil]

This track is over G-Units - I Dont Want To Talk About. I would class this song as more of a comedy song from me. I still have to add voice overs on it, but here it is:

Link: http://limelinx.com/files/df23962c917fd ... edc2891047

Feedback would be appreciated

[B.A.D.]

the beat is good, good choice on it

hook is well done, the idea is nice, I like it... but sounds kinda bad timed or maybe it was too loud

quality is really nice, sounds clean, a lil loud, but very very clean, good job on that

the flow didnt came in as i expected, its very out of beat, you flow good but you are not flowing to the beat.... you need to connect more with the beat

very funny lines, good story telling

work on how you write to the beat and how you flow on it
like i said, you are doing it good, but not along with the beat

[Tranquil]

the beat is good, good choice on it

hook is well done, the idea is nice, I like it... but sounds kinda bad timed or maybe it was too loud

quality is really nice, sounds clean, a lil loud, but very very clean, good job on that

the flow didnt came in as i expected, its very out of beat, you flow good but you are not flowing to the beat.... you need to connect more with the beat

very funny lines, good story telling

work on how you write to the beat and how you flow on it
like i said, you are doing it good, but not along with the beat

Thanks Man

[GibbzyTrShady]

Beat is Heavy mixing is nice besides the fact vocals are a touch to high lyrics are funny as shit !!!
maybe just a lil more Annociation on ure words just a lil stronger delivery but other than that this is deffo a 8/10 man keep it up an dont forget to work harder an harder on every song you make!!

[Tranquil]

Beat is Heavy mixing is nice besides the fact vocals are a touch to high lyrics are funny as shit !!!
maybe just a lil more Annociation on ure words just a lil stronger delivery but other than that this is deffo a 8/10 man keep it up an dont forget to work harder an harder on every song you make!!

Thanks Man Im gonna turn the vocals down a bit when i actully get in there and do my voice overs,

[Xray]

Not bad bro, it's better than your previous work. The beat fits this song perfect, and the lyrics were on point. Flow is getting there, keep at it and you'll be there in no time. I liked the hook, it patched the track together nicely, keep working on the lyrics though, lyrically it could of been better. Keep at it homie.

[Brownwall]

The song is good. It could sound a little more polished. Your flow was generally tight throughout. Lyrically, it was fine. Like you said, it was just a comedy track, but it could sound much better simply with a more polished delivery. Check out my group's stuff too if u find time: http://www.youtube.com/user/Brotherhood3MUSIC

[Tash8]

haha cool song... flow is not good at all though work on that.. same with delivery, ti was pretty obvious you're reading though so u might wanna memorize.

[Mr. Chambers]

ok i'ma keep it 100%
i didn't enjoy the song at all....
i mean i understand you were going for like a "funny" story type of effect...but to me....neither of the stories were really funny or entertaining...accompanied with your poor flow and delivery pretty much made the song hard to listen to......i dunno if your new or not...but keep working on the flow and delivery....i ain't doing this to be an asshole.....i just don't think theres a purpose to lie to you and tell you this was a good song with minor improvements if i thought it was horrible......wish you the best on your next song 1....

[Tranquil]

Thanks to every one