Raw torture

[Edge]

Raw torture to law enforcers, theyr bout to feel the pain
My words cure everything, but i refuse to heal the slain
Im better than you, everything you spittins dreadfull, I rock ya
Poppin pills and lighting Ls, sippin redbull and vodka
I'm crazy drunk and high, mess up my funk and die
So keep taking little shots and in my trunk you'l lie
Your breathless, tryin to go against this, I'm reckless
You tried to disrespect this, now all you see is death bitch
I rock ya necklace, ya watch and ya brand new bracelet
Cut off your face, hide your body, strand you faceless
You don’t want to face this, your thoughts are tasteless
When I see your blood splatter, all I get is crazed bliss
Im dangerous, you cant tame this, you are just a nameless
Lame bitch, a slain snitch, now you need a brain stitch
there’s nothing left to do but burn you like a damn candle
I told you from the start not to start beef you cant handle

[Fa-Q]

Damn edge I love this piece...good structure and greeeat multis...I think the only thing leff for you my man is to have like a crazy rhyme scheme and maybe increse your vocab a bit...still great piece

[Edge]

Damn edge I love this piece...good structure and greeeat multis...I think the only thing leff for you my man is to have like a crazy rhyme scheme and maybe increse your vocab a bit...still great piece

thanks my man... what exactly is rhyme scheme?

[Fa-Q]

Damn edge I love this piece...good structure and greeeat multis...I think the only thing leff for you my man is to have like a crazy rhyme scheme and maybe increse your vocab a bit...still great piece

thanks my man... what exactly is rhyme scheme?

See you just do the typical

A/B
A/B

Switch it up like do

A/B
A/B
C/D/A/B
C/D
C/D

Ya know what I mean...make people delve deep into your lyrics...

[Edge]

Damn edge I love this piece...good structure and greeeat multis...I think the only thing leff for you my man is to have like a crazy rhyme scheme and maybe increse your vocab a bit...still great piece

thanks my man... what exactly is rhyme scheme?

See you just do the typical

A/B
A/B

Switch it up like do

A/B
A/B
C/D/A/B
C/D
C/D

Ya know what I mean...make people delve deep into your lyrics...

ohhh alright... my next drop il work on that

[Edge]

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