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Let It Rain

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Let It Rain

Postby Tash8 » Jan 18th, '10, 23:56

[chorus]
let it rain, let me find all the pain i've held inside
but wait I hate that I'm here all alone
where I lie all by myself
and oh rain, let it rain
let the pain wash away
oh, wash away

imagine no heaven, no hope, no home
it's the same old song
from haiti to orleans, the pain be enormous
the kennedy's before 'em, the painting drawn
what shame it's gone, yeah, shame i know
it's the same old show, cut the crap, time to grow
but the kinder the folk, less likely they show
it's all one image, they act don't live it
let it rain don't make it, all a big gimmic
"get with it!" tell me of the club I'll join,
oh please please please
ain't nothing like being on another man's nuts, such joy
imagine a heaven, some hope, one home
then wait another minute then imagine it gone
destroyed like toys
but there ain't nothing lego 'bout this bold nigh voice
the bolder I get, the more colder it gets
i ain't talkin sex just focus one bit
polaroid this pic and dig your nose and expose it
shit
did you get it or not, i painted you a portrait
the troubles in my life occupying my mind, only if
I can let it rain

[chorus]
let it rain, let me find all the pain i've held inside
but wait I hate that I'm here all alone
where I lie all by myself
and oh rain, let it rain
let the pain wash away
oh, wash away
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Re: Let It Rain

Postby Enimee » Jan 18th, '10, 23:58

NICE i liked the emotion conveyed in this one bro :y: ;)
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Re: Let It Rain

Postby Ticalrecords » Jan 19th, '10, 00:11

its nice. it reads like itll have a weird flow but im all for being offbeat. if its done properly (like Redman) itll sound sick.
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Re: Let It Rain

Postby Tash8 » Jan 19th, '10, 02:46

thanks guys
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