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LIFE'S CHOICE

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LIFE'S CHOICE

Postby dsmith » Jan 18th, '10, 20:16

(Chorus)
Loving you
Is more than just a dream come true
And everything that I do
Is out of loving you…

(Verse 1)
We were so happy, me and your mama all alone
Until one day up on the phone she had some news when she came home
She said she was pregant, and that she was so confused
She didn’t have a plan, so she asked me what we should do
I told her we should have you even though we were still in school
But we would manage though, I swear it’ll be all cool
Working hard, just so that I can pass all my classes
And more hours at my job to secure some finances
So when you came, we wouldn’t have to struggle and stuff
Because raising a baby is exspensive, I wanted to make sure that we had enough
Times are passing, and her belly started sticking out so---
Nine months were almost here, and we started picking out your clothes
And the day had come, and I was about to be your daddy soon
Water breaking, and driving your mama to the emergency room
She was in labor for 20 hours, or 21 maybe
7 pounds 7 ounces, I got me a bouncing baby--boy

(Chorus)
Loving you
Is more than just a dream come true
And everything that I do
Is out of loving you…

(Verse 2)
3 O’clock in the morning I’m changing all your dirty dipes
Pulling out the baby powder and making sure I got some wipes
And it was a struggle to do my work and still take care of you
Typing up reports and still trying to play games too
But I managed though, and you were getting so big
Went so quick from being a toddler into being a little kid
I would throw you the ball, and you would throw it back to me
And we laughed together watching Spongebob on tv
Having fun, but you acted bad sometimes
Like writing on the wall and tearing up your daddy’s rhymes
You’d throw your food on the floor, and I’d have to go and clean it up
But no matter how bad you acted, you were never too much
I had friends with kids your age, and they were always stressing
But it never felt that way with you because you are such a blessing
And I loved it, because of you especially
Always a good feeling with my baby boy sitting next to me

(Chorus)
Loving you
Is more than just a dream come true
And everything that I do
Is out of loving you…

(Verse 3)
Either sitting in the living room, with you playing with the color rings
Or going to the park so that you can play on the swings
It was all love, because you were my little mans
Had everything you wanted that you could fit in your little hands
And you were so smart, getting ready to go to preschool
And I was about to graduate and though that it was so cool
That we were both in the game, and that we were both winning
But my life in it was ending, and you were just beginning
But now I flash back, about 4 and a half years before
Sitting watching tv and your mama walked through the door
Saying she was gonna have a baby, but then I just resisted
We went to get an abortion—and you never existed
There was no waking up early to change your diapers at 3
Or no sitting down watching Spongebob on tv
Or not trips to the park and no playing with ya toys
No going to preschool—and no bouncing baby boy

(Chorus)
Loving you
Is more than just a dream come true
And everything that I do
Is out of loving you…
The Best There is,The Best There Was,The Best There Will Ever Be
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Re: LIFE'S CHOICE

Postby Tomega » Jan 18th, '10, 20:37

ok, i hope the chorus is gonna change, because thats most annoying thing on earth..

verses were dope man, very good storytelling.. i can really picture what you're saying.

it reminded me of game's 'like father like son' song, it has some similarities.

good shit man! :b:
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Re: LIFE'S CHOICE

Postby dsmith » Jan 18th, '10, 20:59

bro im actually gonna sample the the lovin you song and use it on the hook
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Re: LIFE'S CHOICE

Postby Tomega » Jan 18th, '10, 21:27

dsmith wrote:bro im actually gonna sample the the lovin you song and use it on the hook


i was afraid you were gonna do that. lol.

i already called some copyright watchdogs hoping they could prevent you from doing so.
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Re: LIFE'S CHOICE

Postby dsmith » Jan 19th, '10, 06:07

in that case i guess ima change it a little
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