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Enimee vs. mcZu (VOOTE NOWS NINJAPEOPLE!)

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Enimee vs. mcZu (VOOTE NOWS NINJAPEOPLE!)

Postby Enimee » Jan 18th, '10, 23:49

my rhymes ispire the minds of great thinkers to invent things too make life easier
your lines are dry and lack spine n youll hate me for devourin you. wont even make my teethe hurt

ill leave your body to rott in dams you claim your hot but your obviously not the man and
i respect your veteran status but before you make your 4320th post, your drop is damned

im a real lyricsist you pose and fake since 2006 ive been postin against boastin lames
so im used to hyped up forum cats ,for moses sake fuck a sea you couldnt part a lake

i spit fire as soon as i let this match go your playin games(hasbro) and that aint the half bro
caught in spyders web strung up in my lasso im hot call me tabasco your not ill call you fiasco


ill breakdown if need be....should be straight forward though sept for the rott in dams part (play off his location) and the last line fiasco? hes got lines quoted from lupe in his sig
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Re: Enimee vs. mcZu

Postby Spyder » Jan 19th, '10, 00:00

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Re: Enimee vs. mcZu

Postby mcZu » Jan 19th, '10, 00:17

I'm a General, he's just in the army, he can't harm me, so how will he end me?
Gender role? He the bitch, not even my rival, he can't spell, so how is he an enemy?

He wouldn't be supplying Eagles in the military if he worked at an Armani store
E from Maryland, I'll make his life divorce, now y'all can say there's a body-more

Even if Enimee tatoed Rosa Acosta on his forearm, he wouldn't have a trick up his sleeve
He's like his state, has old lines, not even good for 2 bars, so no Twix up this league

I know how he got his name, when he was born, stuborn he got torn, the doc entered thee
Placenta with his dick, little E started screaming: ''Doc, and, uhm, me?''


I won't break down my bars, since he didn't as well.
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Re: Enimee vs. mcZu

Postby Enimee » Jan 19th, '10, 00:20

nice drop :sweating:
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Re: Enimee vs. mcZu

Postby mcZu » Jan 19th, '10, 00:28

Yours is not bad as well. :smoking:

Now vote ppl.
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Re: Enimee vs. mcZu (VOOTE NOWS NINJAPEOPLE!)

Postby Enimee » Jan 19th, '10, 12:55

bump vooote
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Re: Enimee vs. mcZu (VOOTE NOWS NINJAPEOPLE!)

Postby Beckford » Jan 19th, '10, 13:04

I liked the first one better. It made me laugh more.
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Re: Enimee vs. mcZu (VOOTE NOWS NINJAPEOPLE!)

Postby Enimee » Jan 19th, '10, 13:10

maybe you could ehhh break it down a bit :)
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Re: Enimee vs. mcZu (VOOTE NOWS NINJAPEOPLE!)

Postby Beckford » Jan 19th, '10, 13:13

Enimee wrote:maybe you could ehhh break it down a bit :)

Alright. I'll just get that stencil thing from the other battle.

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(3) Punchlines- Enimee
(3) Personals- Enimee
(2) Multies- Enimee
(1) Flow- Draw
(1) Structure- McZu
(1) Vocab/Complex- McZu
(1) Other- Eminee made me laugh. McZu didn't.
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Re: Enimee vs. mcZu (VOOTE NOWS NINJAPEOPLE!)

Postby Enimee » Jan 19th, '10, 13:15

thanks preciate it i guess that makes it 1-0
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Re: Enimee vs. mcZu (VOOTE NOWS NINJAPEOPLE!)

Postby Strictt Ame » Jan 19th, '10, 22:44

(3) Punchlines- Tie
(3) Personals- McZu
(2) Multies- Enimee
(1) Flow- Tie
(1) Structure- Tie
(1) Vocab/Complex- McZu
(1) Other- McZu..the twix line was the x-factor for me

10-7 for McZu..

Enimee, you had some nice concepts but they didnt hit hard at all, the moses line couldve been much better if you reworded it or set it up better..and the Fiasco line just came of weak to me..

Close battle but I think McZu got this..
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Re: Enimee vs. mcZu (VOOTE NOWS NINJAPEOPLE!)

Postby Enimee » Jan 20th, '10, 21:55

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Re: Enimee vs. mcZu (VOOTE NOWS NINJAPEOPLE!)

Postby gutawafang » Jan 21st, '10, 03:22

(3) Punchlines- Zu
(3) Personals- Enimee
(2) Multies- Draw
(1) Flow- Zu
(1) Structure- Draw
(1) Vocab/Complex- Enimee
(1) Other- Zu

Zu - 5
Enimee - 4

I vote Zu. Nice battle guys. :worship:
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Re: Enimee vs. mcZu (VOOTE NOWS NINJAPEOPLE!)

Postby Enimee » Jan 21st, '10, 11:11

thats 2-1 thanks for the votes guys seriously....and uhh
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Re: Enimee vs. mcZu (VOOTE NOWS NINJAPEOPLE!)

Postby art_geek » Jan 25th, '10, 05:01

(3) Punchlines- Enimee
(3) Personals- Enimee
(2) Multies- Enimee
(1) Flow- Draw
(1) Structure- McZu
(1) Vocab/Complex- Enimee
(1) Other- None

i thought both drops were average however, i was likin' enimee's endin' bars. it was pretty dope so my vote goes to enimee .
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