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50 Bars

Postby Strictt Ame » Jan 22nd, '10, 04:54

Since my battles arent gettin votes right now I figured I would just post some shit up..50 bar I did on IronMic..may not know the names in CAPS but Fourwordds is J Roc..

Im a fuckin certified-villain, spittin purified-writtens
Hear the pur-of-my-engine, I ensure-the-right-business
And came to mop up your pathetic watered-down-verse
Knock ya I Crooked from this Slaughter-House-curse
When Im-bored my viciousness seems to spike-more
And my sickness can only be compared to a psych-ward
So get ya shield ready when Im swingin my-sword
The impact I have is like free fallin from five-floors
My rhymes-soar as my lines-tore through ya spine-cord
I drop bombs in battles, you can say I define-war
While you need to try-more just to shine-whore
Im primed-for some grime-gore to make ya die-poor
Ame’s a fuckin giant, you more like five-four
Its time-for me to throw punches, have ya mind-sore
Shoot some MAGIC AERO’s to rip-ya-trash
Then SLANG FLOWs till Im getting FISTS-OF-CASH
My RAPSTYLES are god like, though Im simply-a-mortal
And on the STREET they call me things like SICKLII IMMORAL
Im so ill, the government says it was me that sparked-mersa
I spit VENOM, in FOURWORDDs I can be a HEARTBURSTAH
Its easy to see Ive made a comfortable spot-for-myself
Im plottin-ya-hell while you run off and be stoppin-for-help
Turn ya back on me and Im robbin-ya-wealth
Cops come, I act like an old Dodge-cuz-Im-Stealth
If you get ya goons-to-guard I’ll send ya goons-to-God
That fuckin useless-squad have’em doomed-n-charred
Got crucial-bars that go stupid-hard, leave putrid-scars
This dudes-bizarre got skills to have ya whole crew-ajar
Claim victory, pull out and light up a huge-cigar
Then put it out on a retina, don’t care who-ya-are
Now look in my eyes, see that Im preparin-to-merk-ya
Swearin-I’m-hurtful when twisted off of flarin-the-purple
We go face to face, I could’ve sworn I was starin-at-Eurkle
But ya whole crews like a waffle, a lot of squares-in-ya-circle
Better know-ya-place-in this cipher and slow-ya-hatin
Cuz theres no-debatin murderin emcees is my motivation
And why you call me bro? bitch we are of no-relation
So keep it up I’ll put you six feet below-quotations
The flows-Im-gracin are as hard as the coldest-pavements
And with the dolja-blazin Im as hot as the soul-of-Satan
You want me to slip up I know-ya-waitin, shoulders-shakin
Im wantin you to bitch up cuz Im certain you hoes-are-fakin
So until that day just play ya role and know-the-name-its..
Strictt, with a gun..always on target when I hold-n-Ame-it
Im too shifty-when-I-pass, foot mashes swiftly-on-the-gas
Flyin by you, blunts mixed with sticky-and-some-hash
And every bar is nasty like a slut doin quickies-in-a-cab
Punches plunge deep, they run up quickly-and-I-stab
Take everything bitch Im not at all picky-when-I-snatch
And fuck G-Unit but I just dropped Fifty-on-your-ass
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Re: 50 Bars

Postby shadyfreakzul » Jan 22nd, '10, 11:30

Strictt Ame wrote:Since my battles arent gettin votes right now I figured I would just post some shit up..50 bar I did on IronMic..may not know the names in CAPS but Fourwordds is J Roc..

Im a fuckin certified-villain, spittin purified-writtens
Hear the pur-of-my-engine, I ensure-the-right-business
And came to mop up your pathetic watered-down-verse
Knock ya I Crooked from this Slaughter-House-curse
When Im-bored my viciousness seems to spike-more
And my sickness can only be compared to a psych-ward
So get ya shield ready when Im swingin my-sword
The impact I have is like free fallin from five-floors
My rhymes-soar as my lines-tore through ya spine-cord
I drop bombs in battles, you can say I define-war
While you need to try-more just to shine-whore
Im primed-for some grime-gore to make ya die-poor
Ame’s a fuckin giant, you more like five-four
Its time-for me to throw punches, have ya mind-sore
Shoot some MAGIC AERO’s to rip-ya-trash
Then SLANG FLOWs till Im getting FISTS-OF-CASH
My RAPSTYLES are god like, though Im simply-a-mortal
And on the STREET they call me things like SICKLII IMMORAL
Im so ill, the government says it was me that sparked-mersa
I spit VENOM, in FOURWORDDs I can be a HEARTBURSTAH
Its easy to see Ive made a comfortable spot-for-myself
Im plottin-ya-hell while you run off and be stoppin-for-help
Turn ya back on me and Im robbin-ya-wealth
Cops come, I act like an old Dodge-cuz-Im-Stealth
If you get ya goons-to-guard I’ll send ya goons-to-God
That fuckin useless-squad have’em doomed-n-charred
Got crucial-bars that go stupid-hard, leave putrid-scars
This dudes-bizarre got skills to have ya whole crew-ajar
Claim victory, pull out and light up a huge-cigar
Then put it out on a retina, don’t care who-ya-are
Now look in my eyes, see that Im preparin-to-merk-ya
Swearin-I’m-hurtful when twisted off of flarin-the-purple
We go face to face, I could’ve sworn I was starin-at-Eurkle
But ya whole crews like a waffle, a lot of squares-in-ya-circle
Better know-ya-place-in this cipher and slow-ya-hatin
Cuz theres no-debatin murderin emcees is my motivation
And why you call me bro? bitch we are of no-relation
So keep it up I’ll put you six feet below-quotations
The flows-Im-gracin are as hard as the coldest-pavements
And with the dolja-blazin Im as hot as the soul-of-Satan
You want me to slip up I know-ya-waitin, shoulders-shakin
Im wantin you to bitch up cuz Im certain you hoes-are-fakin
So until that day just play ya role and know-the-name-its..
Strictt, with a gun..always on target when I hold-n-Ame-it
Im too shifty-when-I-pass, foot mashes swiftly-on-the-gas
Flyin by you, blunts mixed with sticky-and-some-hash
And every bar is nasty like a slut doin quickies-in-a-cab
Punches plunge deep, they run up quickly-and-I-stab
Take everything bitch Im not at all picky-when-I-snatch
And fuck G-Unit but I just dropped Fifty-on-your-ass


man u dope.i see as one of the best on this site.u gonna tear their ass up when it comes to battle.
I'm strong, my word is Bond like James
Niggaz be tryin to test, but they 'week' like seven days-Canibus

I don't belong here,my dad fucked my mom in the wrong year.-Budden

like taekwondo you lack punches-Shadyfreakzul

Around here i am the Goat like the Capricorn.-Wale
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Re: 50 Bars

Postby Spyder » Jan 22nd, '10, 20:47

your almost to good to be true :smoking:
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Re: 50 Bars

Postby Yah-hah » Jan 22nd, '10, 20:48

Damn cats been sleepi on you thats some dope shit bro :worship:
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


Nundea Mekeze comin soon May 4th
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Re: 50 Bars

Postby Strictt Ame » Jan 22nd, '10, 22:41

Thanks yall..100 Bars is coming up next!!!
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